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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-12-14 09:48 PM



Hands
By: Noah Eaton
12/18/00

Her hands touch me in the most lovingly way
Caressing my face, dragging down my cheeks, a touch as soft as silk
Her arms wrap around me, I am free in her heart and soul
Open to her world of love, as her hands gracefully open me to her world

Her hands slide down my chest gently, her soft palms softly etching into my heart
Like a branding iron that burns soft and tender, your love forever lights up my heart
My hand slowly caresses your neck, as I softly speak the words of love I have for you
As you speak such words of affection that touch my heart like your hand that touched me

Her hands hold my heart dearly, just as I fondle hers in mine
As our love for each other slowly bleeds from our hearts and into our veins like syrup
Our hands an eternal healer, filling our hearts with each others tender love and care
And like a hummingbird, we drink the nectar and sweetness of each others hearts, held in loves hands

Her hands hold me close to her when I feel morose or confused
She touches my lips with her fingers, which restore a bright smile to my face
She drags them down slowly to my neck, and she wraps her hands around me and her lips kiss mine
A golden touch from my love is all I need to clear my head, just as my hands heal her wounds

Her hands welcome me to a special fantasy we share together, deep into the poetry, words, and voice we speak and share
To a place far beyond reality, high above the earth and into the heavens, where only love and music and beauty exist
Together, with hands wrapped around each other, we soar high above oceans of pearls and painted deserts
As we listen to angels and fairies and sprites play their harps and sing the songs of love and peace to the world

Her hands touch me with true love all so magical
Even when her hands don’t touch me, her palms always are painted in my heart, warming my body with joy
I hold your hand as we walk through life on this beautiful quiet forest pathway to our dreams
Forever holding our love in each others hands, and never letting go…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-14-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-14 10:00 PM


*sigh* how absolutely beautiful is this magnificent poem. I could feel the soft loving touch she has for you and how it warms your heart. BRAVO!!!**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-14 10:05 PM


WoW Noah!  This is very remarkable...I hadn't really thought about all the things hands and fingers could do...but, you have said it all so well...and I had better not get into it too much or I will be sent to adult!   *Sunshine is watching me* LOL....
Hugs to you sweetie!  Luv, Nancy.  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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