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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-12 08:54 PM


In a hammock here we lie
On this magical Summer's day
With the warm alluring breeze
Back and forth we slowly sway

The sun warms our weary bodies
Just like your love always warms my heart
There is no amount of distance
That could keep our two souls apart

The water is the color of sapphires
With twinkling diamonds across the bay
Such a spectacular sight to behold
From the place where we now lay

We lie face to face in silence
There are no words we need to speak
As your love always takes me higher
Up to the highest mountain peak

You whisper the words 'I love you'
Then so tenderly you kiss my lips
As your hands move their way down lower
And begin to caress my naked hips

Together we'll admire the sunset
As the moon lights us from above
Whilst we search the constellations
And discover all the joys of love

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2001-12-12 09:22 PM


Sue,
Is it summer there? Love the thoughts and imagery of this poem. That sounds like a whole day naked. Yummmm!  

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-12-12 09:26 PM


Sue..a very warm and wonderful poem of love
experienced by two lovers...the vision of
this is done well.

Suetang
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3 posted 2001-12-12 09:32 PM


Hello Larry
Yes, it is Summer over here in Australia, believe it or not! We are the complete opposite to you over there.  Thanks for the comment.

Magnus
Thank you so much for your kind words.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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4 posted 2001-12-12 11:03 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, you're sooooooo romantic, the sapphire waters and the sparkling ocean sun shine with romantic beauty in your lovely words! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Sue! (kiss on cheek) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-12-13 12:38 PM


Very romantic Sue...James
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