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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2001-12-12 08:49 PM


What's up Passions...I was pleased with the response to my last poem so, I decided to post a quickie for y'll and if this poem seems a little cocky it's because Nate Dogg my alias, can be very cocky and confident at times as opposed to Nathan who is humble, mild-mannered, and soft spoken,....anyways, this piece is dedicated to every poet on this board cause, you're all pen-tastic to me....peace!!!


Pen-tastic.....

Poetically inclined,
to elevate your mind.

Pen-tastic.....

Once my thoughts accelerate like a rocket blast,
my pen starts flowing like a seismograph.

Pen-tastic.....

Poems overflowing with soul and such vivid imagery
as the equation, makes such a beautiful chemistry.

Pen-tastic.....

Rhyming straight from the ark od my heart,
painting picturesque visuals like Mozart.

Pen-tastic.....

Poetry written with meaning and integrity,
giving my readers a dose of mental therapy.

Pen-tastic.....

Rhymes that will be remembered for years and centuries to come
as my rhymes circulate to bring the wotld togehter as one.

Pen-tastic.....

My mind is the instrumental to which my pen quotes
as the melody floats, like the buoyancy of a boat
as my imagination gets stretched to the elastic,
with magnetic flows, that classify as pen-tastic.

© Copyright 2001 Nate Dogg - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-12-12 11:18 PM


hey. . . you're pretty pen-tastic yourself there Nate. . .

love this one. . . thanks for the repost. . . peace. . .  

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DYME
Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104
Texas
2 posted 2001-12-18 03:49 PM


The mind of a poet.... I like this one a lot. (notice I put that on a lot of your posts?)Good job!!

I'm not crazy...I have papers to prove it!!

No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17

amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
3 posted 2001-12-18 03:57 PM


This is a type-riffic piece!!!  Awesome job and way too fun!!
Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2001-12-18 07:30 PM


Thank you for the wonderful comments!!

Nathan

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