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Autumn Love
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Autumn Love |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Tears falling like autumn leaves heart as cold as a winters breeze Promises shattered like broken glass forever and always but nothing lasts Love as dry as the crunching leaves a lusting heart yearns and decieves Broken promises and a shattered heart A happy home stolen and torn apart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How sad. You wrote this pain so well, with vivid imagery. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Midnitesun Thanks for checking it out.Thank goodness its not from personal experience! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am elated that this is not a personal experience...though I know there are many who have felt similar feelings....you have penned them well. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Magnus Thanks!Yea,I know quite a few. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Stevie,this is great! As your mama I`m really glad this isn`t from personal experience!   Love,mama:   |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Stevie, this is so very sad, my heart cries out to your sorrow! (sad sigh) Always know that you are loved by many and we are always here for you when you need someone to talk to! (sigh) My heart is with you, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stevie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
So very well done, Stevie  this one really shows off your poetic genius.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ouch. I’m glad to hear this isn’t from personal experience. You write the pain of it very well. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Mama I'm glad you liked it.You know me and my wife has a perfect relationship. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Noah Thanks for your kind words as always. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Lyra That was very nice but I think genious may be a bit much for a garbage man. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Tracey Thanks for checking it out! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Stevie darling boy, (Did I do all that?) And I wasn't even trying too. No seriously this is utterly utterly wonderful. It is truly perfection, the lines flow like water. Absolutely perfect  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Very rhythmatic with excellent imagery, well done. O "Got Opeth?" |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Where did my original reply go to? Anyway, the rhyme and rhythm were "right on" and the imagery was excellent. Opeth |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Marsha Opeth Thank you both very much! |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
This was absolutely amazing  !!!! Thank you for sharing this with us all.-R. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! I am sure glad it isn't from personal experience. It brought tears to my eyes. Powerful writing. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, good that it's not a personal experience. Well said. |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Very well written! I really like the flow. A hearts tale sad but true But soon love arrives To embrace you *feeling very poetic today* LOL  HUGS Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hey Stevie, We are together again!!I remember this poem from before and it is still good! Happy Holidays to you and your Mom...I am here under the same name Ecrivan |
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