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The Cool Blues
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The Cool Blues |
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amerijuanican Junior Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 12 |
Blue,cool swirls of bright break this souls grey silence On this frosty winter's eve understand,please believe My yearning-heart's request-I need to see you K My knees hit cold earth, my heavy sinners head "i LOVE her, MY GOD!.....please take notice" You smile through a picture, look of my wall I need your smile, so freely warms my heart no fears no worries Lilac scents, give delicate life to your silk wove angel hair These but memories, colors of script, encrypted my grey heart. Soul knows where heart's secret passion lays |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) So sad but beautiful and hopeful, sweet friend! (sigh) Love will come to your heart, and you will discover that secret passion in a single heartbeat and smile somesay soon! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, always believe in yourself and all your dreams will come true! (smiles) You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
This is gorgeous writing, my fellow poet, I mean it, this is GOOD Carol Luna |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely....I hope you've found a home here.  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, very moving write here. I can feel the longing, the yearning. This is a powerful piece. Magnificent If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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