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To Wish Upon a Star

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Auguste
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0 posted 12-12-2001 03:49 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

To Wish Upon a Star

by Michael


Oh night of blessed souless stars,
for eons you have cast your light.
Romantic, in your solitude,
some much too far for human sight.

If fingertips could touch the sky,
her name Iíd spell with heavenís shine
and hope she saw what I had done,
while quietly dreaming she be mine.

As child, I wished upon you all.
Sometimes, I still do so today.
I know itís only fantasy.
To have her, there is just no way.

So now I lay me down to rest,
but one last wish before I sleep.
Please always let me bring her smiles
and never give her cause to weep.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.††

© Copyright 2001 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-12-2001 03:54 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

well, yes, those fantasies can be a double edged sword.  This is lovely.

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(sigh) Oh Michael, this is sooooooo gorgeous, I love it! (big hugggssssss) Wishes can come true, and I know deep down with all my heart that yours will, and you will forever make her happy and feel loved and blessed with her! (sigh) We all love you so very much, sweet Michael, always hold the wish close to your heart! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Auguste, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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so romantic Michael!! *swoon* lovin this my sweet friend   how beautiul  
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  I am new to the group. I think this poem show me the unattainability, and beautiful mystery, in the star. We, in life, sometimes give all our biggest and and seemless dreams
to a star so real in everyday life. Hope.

Wonderfully composed peice. I llok forward to more

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So now I lay me down to rest,
but one last wish before I sleep.
Please always let me bring her smiles
and never give her cause to weep.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wonderful write Michael!  Just remember that Disney song...."When you wish upon a star...makes no difference who you are...."
~Hugs, Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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And that it's what true love is all about. Great wishes for the one you trully love. Wonderful.
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7 posted 12-12-2001 04:44 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

awwwwww how sweet and soooooo lovely penned *sigh*.....love it!

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*sighs* You always write romance so well! This is delicate and lovely  
Can I borrow those stars?    

Take care,
Melissa~

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it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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Michael--This is gorgeous!  One of my favorites now, I think.  Hugs!
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Michael,

   Awww.. I like this   I too still wish on the first night's star as well. It's a habit I'll probably never break hehe.  Very much enjoyed  

Hugs,
Tara

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†††† - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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Someday all your star wishes will come true, Michael.This is perfect.
Sandra
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What a lovely prayerlike lullaby. Beautiful Michael. Such tender feelings, wrapped up in beautiful words.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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Irish Rose,
ain't that the truth? LOL!    Thanks you

Noah,
You're much too kind.    Thank you very much

Susan,
Thank you for "loving" this.    (((hugs)))

amerijuanican,
Welcome to Passions.   You'll love it here!  Thank you for liking this one.

Nancy,
I remember it well.    Thank you, Nancy and (((hugs)))

walker,
This poem is only fantasy.  There's no one out there I'm wishing about.     Thank you

Charisma,
You're very sweet.    Thank you so much.

Melissa,
I do tend to be a romantic, don't I?   Thank you, Melissa.  I'm so very glad you liked this.

Martie,
One of your favorites?  Well, woohoooo@me. LOL!  Seriously, such a sweet thing to say.    Thanks, sweetie.  (((hugs)))

Tara,
Keep that habit.  We never know, do we?   Thank you. (((hugs)))

Sandra,
You know I wish the same for you, my friend.  (((hugs))) and thank you  

Tracey,
Such a nice compliment.    Thank you dearly.  


Everyone,
You always give me a smile in your replies and I do so much appreciate your kindness.  Thank you.  

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.††

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connect the stars and I bet you'll find a great big smiley with the brightest shine. Big Smile my friend. Bless you and yours. Beautiful dream and poem.

Sincerely,
Regina
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BRAVO!!! Wishing on stars is what I do best. I still believe in their magic. I love the way this poem had me seeing a sky filled with magical stars. Wonderful. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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