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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-12-12 02:50 PM



“JUST A MESSAGE”
by
Bill Charles
  ~~~~
I have thought many times
about our words, but now they
are lost in the dark, but an
offering made, generous to you…

But with vindictiveness, anger,
and revenge clouding your mind,
traits that I have seen, coming
from the depths of your soul…

To destroy, but fear not for
your answer I will live with,
but you also to know what comes
forth, not pleasant these things…

Tears now rain within my
heart, for you will now know
my answer, as I wander into
the shadows of the abyss…
~~~~

© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-12 02:55 PM


Oh Bill, those traits are well within us all, sometimes we deny it, but to allow them to come forth, we must not....this is a sad write.

Kathleen (Kay)
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Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-12 02:57 PM


Not just a message, Bill, but feelings that cause your heart to weep...wander not far from us, dear one, for we will gladly wipe the tears from your cheeks with gentle, loving hands. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-12 02:58 PM


lots of hugs to you, this is such a sad write, I hope you are ok  
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4 posted 2001-12-12 03:06 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Bill, this is so very sad! Whenever you need someone to talk to, we are all hear for you to annoint your tears with love and hope! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend! We all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-12-12 04:14 PM


Tears now rain within my
heart, for you will now know
my answer, as I wander into
the shadows of the abyss…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Such a sad write today my friend.  Boy, we have all had these feelings at one time or another. Wish I could reach out and make you smile and be happy....
~Hugs, Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

LngJhnAg
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6 posted 2001-12-12 04:26 PM


Bill - Been there, done that, partner.  Great writing - it brings it all together perfectly.
Charisma
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7 posted 2001-12-12 05:01 PM


Heart wrenched penned....hope you are ok.

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

kaile
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8 posted 2001-12-13 12:47 PM


i guess that's Love then, for how else would one walk willingly into the shadows of the abyss??

good write...

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