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vandana
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0 posted 2001-12-12 11:23 AM



Who can tell
Where your heart falls?
As evening calls,
Who can say
Where you can find love In there?
Who can tell
Where  your love goes?
and only time can tell you
and why?
One can say so much,
Whether It Is time,
Who can say
you can hear the song
When you feel lonely
and want to be loved by
someone
only when the time leads you
to find a heart
Who can say all that to you?
only your heart can tell you
only when the time
and a day with a fallen rain
Who can say?
Who can love you?
If you only find yourself alone,
Who can say everthing?
When the time has taken your heart away,
Who can say?
All that to you....
Who can say to you?

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 12-12-2001).]

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Son Netier
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1 posted 2001-12-12 11:25 AM


You explore one of the great mysteries of Love, the why. Enjoyed.

Bill

Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-12 11:34 AM


Yes, who can say...Love is something we have no control over so the questions always remain. You have put it so well in this poem. Magnificent. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-12-12 11:40 AM




(sigh) Oh Vandana, your words are always so wonderful to read, I feel we all ask these questions, and that is typical! (sigh) Only time can tell what love will bring, but in the end, your loving heart will forever shine with loves happiness, and all our answers are found in joy! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet frend, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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