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The Twinkle In Your Eyes

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Son Netier
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0 posted 12-12-2001 11:01 AM       View Profile for Son Netier   Email Son Netier   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Son Netier

When I gaze eye to eye with you at night,
The sound of love is not the pound of heart,
Itís sighs so soft with tenderness so light,
The flutter of lashes before we start.

Loving look in the twinkle in your eyes,
Captures my gaze in lost eternity,
Says to me of love that words only tries,
Having you here is all reality.

The twinkle in your eyes is all the light,
The sigh from your sweet lips is all the sound,
How can I not remember this delight
Of the passion and meaning I have found.

Laying beside me in the deep of night,
In the comfort of feeling not of sight.

© Copyright 2001 Bill Shivers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-12-2001 11:04 AM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White


You're on a roll...I get the feeling that you might not have been writing up until this point, and have so much in you that wants to come out.  This is a Good Place for you to be, here with Passions in Poetry...
Startime
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2 posted 12-12-2001 11:05 AM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

*sigh* what wonderful romance to start the day with. Your love flows with gentle tenderness that bathes the heart is a soft warm mist. *sigh* your poems make me feel romantic. Magnificent. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 12-12-2001 11:12 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

enjoyed this much
Son Netier
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Lady in White,
A nurse maybe?  Seems Iíve been left with much time alone, and I find for now writing is a nice way to fill the void.  It feels like a good place, and a friendly place.

Startime,
This was actually an ending of a day, but I think I know what you mean, being as you are reading this in your morning.  A tender comes from the memory of the tenderness, and maybe the longing for it to be more often.

Bill
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Vandana,
You slipped in while I was responding to the other nice people here, I wouldnít want to miss you for your response in kindness, Thank you.

Bill
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6 posted 12-12-2001 11:43 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(sigh) Oh Son, you are sooooooo romantic, your loving words always whisper to the heart in so many ways in your lovely sonnets! (sigh) We all love you so very much, sweet friend, may the twinkle in your loves eyes forever shine to you! (sigh) Soooooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Son, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 12-12-2001 11:50 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

This is wonderfully written...

Regards,
sudhir
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8 posted 12-12-2001 11:52 AM       View Profile for N orth Carolina Girl   Email N orth Carolina Girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for N orth Carolina Girl

Oh gosh,my heart just melted reading this.So very romantic

Juanita
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9 posted 12-12-2001 12:15 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

I'm pretty speechless here, I guess my imagination is in overdrive...I do hope you have more  

Kathleen (Kay)
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Laurie Lee

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Noah,
What a wonder response and so festive too

Sudhir,
My thanks to you

Juanita
Melting can be nice on a cold day, I hope you have someone to catch the drips

Kay,
I might be able to rustle up a couple of more, but I understand 2 a day is the limit, so Iíll have to post another tomorrow.  Donít worry about being speachless, sometimes the best communications are said without a single sound.

Bill
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11 posted 12-12-2001 06:46 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

I'm bumping you, I hope you don't mind  

Kathleen (Kay)
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Laurie Lee

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12 posted 12-12-2001 07:55 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Oh my!  Oh Sigh!  This is soooo romantic!!
What wonderful romantic words....YES!!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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13 posted 12-12-2001 08:04 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Superbly written....much enjoyed this...
Sonnet away when ready....
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14 posted 12-12-2001 09:16 PM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tracey

In the comfort of feeling not of sight.

What a lovely way of putting it. Beautiful words, beautiful feelings.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

JamesMichael
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15 posted 12-12-2001 10:00 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed reading this...James
Son Netier
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Kay,
I hardly felt it, could you get a little closer on that bump.  This is just a figurative bump?  You red-haired girls are so playful, and sweet too.

Enchantress,
You must be romantic yourself, because the say you have to be one to know one.  Iíll take romance in any time.

Mangus
You are  kind with your praise, I will try to write a few more.  This place is an inspiration to the writer with so many fine examples about.

Tracey,
Sometimes I get lucky with my expression, but it always seems to not be enough.  I always have a word or two more I want to say.  Your words are a comfort to me in thinking I might have got it said right.

James,
Glad you did.

Bill
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17 posted 12-13-2001 01:46 PM       View Profile for Apachecat906   Email Apachecat906   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Apachecat906

The twinkle in your eyes is all the light,
The sigh from your sweet lips is all the sound
=============

Ahh this is so beautiful.  This must be just exactly what love is like.  Good job, I look forward to reading more from you, I bet you have more where this came from.  

Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold

Son Netier
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Apachecat906,
I have a few more of these hanging around, seems something pops up everytime Iím near a lovely lady, and special ladies even more so.  Iím just trying to reflect some of the beauty

Bill
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19 posted 12-30-2005 03:02 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I read a lot of your poetry this evening and wondered where on earth you have vanished too, your work is very enjoyable.  

Carpe' Diem

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20 posted 12-17-2007 01:52 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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