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Pouring the Wine
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Pouring the Wine |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
White wine and cheese to slice and taste with you, Give me each bit of your day in review, Nibble the sharp with the tiny bites too Quick gulping down another glass or two. Your eyes slow close and you’re still talking on Till it’s just a mumble of the events Then silent words as your waking is done, I’m be well informed of the day you spent. Carrying to a softer resting place, Quilted comfort of warm blanket cover, I am struck by the beauty of your face, And above you gazing I do hover. I could stand there watching all of the night, But I must go now and turn out the light. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is so sweet and beautiful! (smiles) How beautiful it would feel to wake in the morning and look into your loves eyes beside you. (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Son, your sonnets are breathtakingly beautiful! (big hugggssssss) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Son, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely, every woman loves to be listened to, as it should be. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Make that white zin, and you've got a taker! Seriously, this likes me very much, so I think I shall tuck it safely into my library, it's a Keeper! |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Noah, Your words, so sweet and thoughtful are great encouragement to such a beginning writer like me. Kay, Listening is so easy to do, my problem is being mezmerized by beauty. Both of form and of the way the words are said. And yes, it’s something that needs to be done, for how else can you expect to please if you don’t listen to what they say. Sunshine, I’m not too knowledgeable on wines, I just buy what sounds good, or what is advised goes with the meal. If you wanted White Zin, that is what it would be. But I am unsure of what you mean by Library. But I take it it’s a high compliment. Bill |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a sonnet that flows with the tender feelings that she inspires in your heart. Moments spent over a glass of wine leave a sweetness behind that gives flight to a romantic soul. Lovely. **hug**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Startime It’s easy to be tender with someone that’s loving and tender, I am just thankful for the times I do have. I’m not much of a drinker but I can pour, I’m not much or a talker so I listen. I’m not so sure of what romance is, but I know what I like. Bill |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Bill, to help answer your question to Sunshine, the "library" can be found when you are responding to a person's poem, and down below, but just over where you hit "submit" are four boxes. You can click on those, and enter a poem you would like to go back to in your own personal "library". Then when you want to review some favored poets/poems, you need simply click on Private Library which you should see at the top of the page in the dark blue bars. And that, Sir, is where Keepers are stored! |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Lady in White, you come to the aid of a poor of knowledge, if not a nurse maybe just an Angel? Thanks for the imformation Bill |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
heck, I'm gonna post a poem, if others can so can I. this is cool |
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