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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-12-11 08:01 PM



Ice Angel
~*~

Ice angel tell me,
did you lose your wings
when you reached too high
for finer things?
There’s more love beyond the blues
waiting patiently for you
can’t be bought
but can be found
when you keep your feet
on solid ground
you’ll find your wings
when you remember this...
love is found in little things
too

BloomingRose

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-11 08:04 PM


Magnificent and filled with ageless truth. I love it. The picture sets it off perfectly. **Hugs**


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-11-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-12-11 08:05 PM




BRAVO!!! Yes, love is always in the simplest things, and she will spread her wings again! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet Debra, love fills every word of your heart! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet rose, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-12-11 08:05 PM


This is absolutely GORGEOUS! I like the picture too.  The title fits perfectly like a gem! Wow, I really enjoyed this, must put it in my personal library!!!!

mirror man
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4 posted 2001-12-11 10:28 PM


I agree, this is good.  Picture too.
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
5 posted 2001-12-11 10:36 PM




Wonderful.....& lovely.

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Shadowed_Innersense
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since 2001-12-05
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somewhere at the edge
6 posted 2001-12-11 10:45 PM


So true and well written ...
the further away from that which truth so warms, the colder life actually seems.

May your wings never feel that biting cold
of such reality.

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-12-11 11:24 PM


Ice angel tell me,
did you lose your wings
when you reached too high
for finer things?
There’s more love beyond the blues
waiting patiently for you
============================

Hey Deb....I love seeing you trying your hand at rhyme...
this is lovely...a wonderful inspire and perfect pic to compliment or perhaps the pic was the inspire ...
either way...well done on this timely seasonal piece  

Its not like you to say sorry,
I was waitin on a different story.
This time I'm mistaken ...
for handing you a heart worth breaking.

Nickleback

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