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The Bedchamber
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The Bedchamber |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
“Would you kiss me, m‘Lord?” “Lass, what are ye doing in my bedchamber? Ye must go before the maid takes number of the guest, I cannot be found with thee here..alone!” “But, m’Lord, I have never been kissed and I so want to learn.” “Sweet God in heaven, lass, have ye no shame? I cannot take advantage of a raven haired beauty such as thyself? Thou art a bonny sight, indeed and I am honored by thy innocence...but what do ye mean ye have not tasted of a man’s lips? This cannot be!” “Ah, but it’s true, I have wandered these halls for years, lost, alone and languishing with only my dreams to sustain me....sigh...’tis is a sad life for a lass such as myself.” “Come closer, lass, let me gaze into these eyes for I cannot believe ye breath speak truth!” “Aye, a bloody King’s ransom if I lie! I speak the truth, m'Lord,” “The lass displays a bit of temperment! This is a most delicious invitation and by me Lord’s favor I have done nothing to earn such an honor." “Nay, m’Lord, it is I who am honored.” “By all that is holy, one kiss would nigh be sustaining for me” “Please, m’Lord, one kiss and I shall take my leave.” “Sweet lass, one kiss, and I shall take thee.” Emily [This message has been edited by emily (edited 12-11-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Emily, Naughty,Naughty Enjoyed. |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
as did I, in writing, as did I.  Thank ye! Emily |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Very well done. Sounds as if someone will become a great favorite of her Lord. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I love this. It has a mischievious innocence about it...and I love how you present the struggle of the man.  Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
This is a fun poem. I like the progression. And with tongue in cheek (no pun intended *S*) wonder if he will faulter. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Loved this one, emily. Takes me back a ways . . . All writing comes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Emily...I just love this! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling wickedly* Now this is a lass who knows what she wants.  I love it. A delightful read. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh how I do love the ways of old, with maidens fair in search of love.....Need we a Knight to pleasure the maiden? Nicely written...much enjoyed this...I am sure this maiden will not wander the halls for long. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Yes, may he receive her kiss and bring joy and happiness between them! (sigh) I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) BRAVO!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Emily, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
Thank you all for reading this, I had fun writing it and I doubt a man anywhere would have hesitated this long Emily |
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