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Sven
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0 posted 2001-12-11 02:36 PM


a minor
7/4

woodwinds
Flute--subject          repeat          subject     continue
Oboe        --answer            repeat          answer      continue
Clarinet            --theme, slow and lonely
Bassoon--accompanies all of this as a helper
brass
Trumpet-tacet
Horn in F                                                                   harmonic, muted
Trombone-tacet
Tuba-tacet

Harp-seventh chord arpeggios

strings
First Violin--divisi in octaves, flowing rising scale
Second Violin--                     divisi in octaves, flowing descending scale
Viola--scale, falling in quarter notes     now, again with the Cellos
Cello                                               --now, a third above
Contrabass       --arpeggios in key, eighth notes

Double Bar--end of Movement II

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-11 03:25 PM


I think I understood about 1/16 of the above.  About half the time I take a full pause ||:

Heck, I doan know whachoo talkin' about ... or me, for that matter

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2 posted 2001-12-11 03:35 PM


Hey, what a great arrangement, Sven! Very clever and original!

Cor

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3 posted 2001-12-11 03:51 PM


You have such a way of expressing thoughts.
Sometimes about a thousand feet above my
mind....but that is OK...thanx Sven.

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4 posted 2001-12-11 04:29 PM


You are one amazing writer, who present so many forms and topics...and now you paint music too dear friend.

like it  

Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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5 posted 2001-12-11 04:37 PM




(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Once again your sweet symphony of love shines in your beautiful words, sweet John! (smiles) Your verse sings with scales and arpeggios and create symphonies that light these pages! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! More, more! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2001-12-11 07:51 PM


John, I had no idea you had such a musical background!

Kathleen (Kay)
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7 posted 2001-12-11 08:03 PM


Was that the dance of the sugar plum fairy?

*S*  Dan

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8 posted 2001-12-11 10:02 PM


7/4 time???  Who uses that nowadays??  LOL.  My personal favorite would have been 5/4, but hey, that's me!  

Nice work here, Sven.  I like these musical pieces.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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9 posted 2001-12-11 10:38 PM


Interloper, no need to worry oh Great Voice of the Southland. . . it's open to your own ideas. . . thanks. . .

Cor, thanks. . . I try to make people think. . . it's what I do. . .

Magnus, a thousand feet??  Well, hopefully not that high. . . thank you. . .

Charisma, this is a new idea for me. . .one that I've based on some actual music scores that I've seen. . . they make great poems do they not?  Just add your own music. . . thank you. . .  

Noah, it's always a treat to read your responses. . . thank you for them. . . and keep listening. . .  

Kathleen, music's always been a part of my life. . . I hope to show you more. . . thank you. . .

Rusty Knight, only if you wanted it to be. . .   thank you. . .

LW, 5/4 is ok. . . but, everybody uses that!!!  LOL  Thanks for reading. . .

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