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Sipping Cinnamon Memories
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Sipping Cinnamon Memories |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Bold winter is stripping like a maple tree naked limbs shiver beneath a coat of glee slender limbs beckon cunningly like the lopsided smile of Gypsy Rose Lee I listen to the music of a snow globe sipping the aroma of hot cinnamon tea wrapped within the shawl of whispers haunting whispers of you and me Steam drooling upon ruby lips upon the brim of history now just a shaggy dog story once a brilliant morning glory Snowflakes melting within moonlight Cascading the body of a gypsy night Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Victoria,I enjoyed the images in this.  Juanita |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
"Cascading the body of a gypsy night" WOW... and "Cinnamon Memories" Great write... regards, sudhir |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
SPECTACULAR! I thought for a second i was reading a long-time professionsal's work. Very nice. Take care |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
So wonderful to see you here again, Victoria, this is vivid in imagery and rich in expression! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo gorgeous! (smiles) The magic of a winter night shines in your gorgeous words, as your lovely voice croons like a gypsy in the rapture of the love shining in it. (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Victoria! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful imagery, all the way through, Victoria...I especially loved the first verse. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you all so very much...and for your kind comments...hugss..Happy Holidays ~Victoria~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhhh. . . warming to the heart and the soul. . . wonderful Victoria. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love cinnamon tea and whispers of winter, even when wrapped in a shawl of sad memories. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Victoria...I'm getting into tea's now...I'll have to try some cinnamon...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you sven ..midnitesun and james...loved hearing from you today...hugss ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wonderful imagery. Love the wintry, yet warm feeling from reading this. Deb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Victoria! Think I will curl up with a cup of apple-cinnamon tea. My favourite. Hugs, Nancy. *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thanks Deb and Nancy..nice of you to peek in tonight..hugs...appreciate your sweet comments  ~Victoria~ |
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