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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-12-11 07:50 AM



Leave me alone
I don't want to know
misery
After loving for so long
and giving all
I need to linger longer
between love and despair
where no other emotion dare
enter
Numb
my heart remains intact
not able to be broken
again
even if you try
I smile
proud of myself
I'm in control
stronger than before
I win this time
Frozen
my love remains
unable
to experience pain
even if you return

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 12-11-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-12-11 08:05 AM


Walker,
Well that's plain enough. Enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
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2 posted 2001-12-11 08:50 AM




(sigh) Oh Walker, we're all so proud of you, your beautiful heart deserves pure true love and we are all admired by your courage to listen to your loving heart! (sigh) We all faith in you, sweet friend! May the greatest happiness fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo wonderful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2001-12-11 11:01 AM


u tell em!!!
yea man f**k that! nobody can tell you who you can or cant love.. stand you ground

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
4 posted 2001-12-11 11:19 AM


ouch
she really got to you this one didnt she
arthur

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

5 posted 2001-12-11 11:49 AM


I need to linger longer
between love and despair
where no other emotion dare
enter

Take your time, walker.  The spring thaw will come in it's season and your heart will follow.
This is really a great poem, walker!

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