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Listen to the Breeze

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-11-2001 07:40 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Listen to the Breeze

I launched some words upon the breeze
Among the flowers, through the trees
They danced a dance and echoed slack
The last three words of love me back.

I sent them on the wind to free
Because they would not silent be.
They fired on my brain and tongue
And burned my mouth like pepper stung.

Although I am not infantile
My wit has gone to juvenile.
I hang naÔve and donít believe
The love I have, I can achieve.

It is a love of dreamers real
Beyond the real of age appeal
It is a love of residue
Only given to very few.

The all of what the echo lacked
Was could you, would you, love me back.

© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion


1 posted 12-11-2001 07:46 AM       View Profile for Siofra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Siofra

Oh yes..Sweet Sy..a simple request done in such a way that only you can do it.   enjoyed!  

I am many.

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 12-11-2001 07:49 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Your writing keeps getting better, young man
This is so charming
Love you back
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 12-11-2001 07:55 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Siofa,
Thank you sweet lady.

Elizabeth,
Speaking of charm, you head my list.
Love ya Sy
Janet Marie
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4 posted 12-11-2001 08:26 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Would I ... could I ... love you back?

Why--I would love you in a sack ...
live in a palace or a shack
light of day or night so black
I'll engrave your name upon a plaque!!

Would I ... could I ... love you more?

Why--I would love you in a store
love you more than the day before
love you right down to your core
even if you roar when you snore!!

Would I ... could I ... love you still?

Why--I would love beyond until
love you like a dreamers thrill
in hot of summer or winters chill
If you were ill ... I'd be your pill!!

Would I ... could I ... love you then?

Why--I would love you there and back again
love you and your chinny chin chin
in a dragon's den or in Eden's glen
Love you till you say Amen!!

So should you ask ... Would I ... could I ... love you back?

Even though my rhymes might lack ...
For this stack--Dr. Suess might want to attack ...
So consider this a poetic pact ...
even should the moon crack ... Someone always loves you back!!

*winkiewinkie*

See how you inspire!!
(scary sometimes--aint it) ROFL
me
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


5 posted 12-11-2001 08:41 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

quote:
It is a love of dreamers real
Beyond the real of age appeal
It is a love of residue
Only given to very few.


Good to know that love knows no age...

Congrats on the 9000th post, Sy...
Mistletoe Angel
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(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful! (sigh) It is soooooo beautiful how the breeze can say so much and touch your heart! (smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may eternal love fill your heart. (big hugggsssss) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 12-11-2001 08:56 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

JM,
Your poem was a delight, almost a fright.
You have turned my preen to phantom scheme
And I will see you in your dreams.
Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.

Sunshine,
You will always be my sunshine. *L*

Mistletoe,
You are a delight. Thank you
Janet Marie
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8 posted 12-11-2001 09:08 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Dr Suess's lawyers just called   *L*

and I came back cuz I forgot 2 things ...
to put this in my library....
and to say .....


OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS!!
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 12-11-2001 09:12 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dear Tinkerbell,
I can't wait for our dream. WW R S
arthur
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10 posted 12-11-2001 11:52 AM       View Profile for arthur   Email arthur   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for arthur

yes
thats all a lot of us have
echoes of love
but better than than nothing!!!!!!!!!
arthur
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 12-11-2001 03:00 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Arthur,
We always have dreams, thank you for the read.
suthern
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12 posted 12-12-2001 11:53 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Your last line is the question every heart whispers as it gives its love... This is just beautiful, Seymour!!!

And rofg at JM's response... wistfulness just lost it to giggles. *G*

N orth Carolina Girl
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13 posted 12-12-2001 12:01 PM       View Profile for N orth Carolina Girl   Email N orth Carolina Girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for N orth Carolina Girl

Seymour,you seem so sweet how could anyone not love you?I really enjoyed this!
Juanita
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14 posted 05-26-2008 01:46 PM       View Profile for water_stained_wisdom   Email water_stained_wisdom   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for water_stained_wisdom

I launched some words upon the breeze
Among the flowers, through the trees
They danced a dance and echoed slack
The last three words of love me back.

I sent them on the wind to free
Because they would not silent be.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~


           


these remnants of a voice and smile,
landscapes cloaked in forest green ...
like your life unfolding mile by mile.

V.Teng

 
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