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Can We Start Over
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Can We Start Over |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
For the people who wrote my last post!! This is one of the 1 of the song we're thinking about putting on the demo! Let us know what you think? "Can We Start Over" © 2001 Brian Eggertsen,Ali Haddad,Michael L. Henriksen,Haidar Mohammed, All Rights Reserved (Spoken) Listen, There something,I gotta say Before I'm at my last breath On my dying day. V1: Every step Every breath I take Reminds me of you Oh, and I can't go a day without you Weighing on my mind... I watched you Turn and walk away Wouldn't even speak 'Cause, words couldn't make you stay No, no, no, no You'd made up your mind... Lift: Girl if you Give me one more chance I'd give you all the romance You've always wanted Just help me understand 'Cause I believe That love don't have an end... C: Can We Start Over Can We Start Over again Can we wash away the pain and lay the past behind I'm here till the end of time (Can We, Can We) Can we Start Over... V2: Looking at Some pictures of you I thought I had lost Just wondering how I blew Everything All that I had with you... Repeat Lift: Repeat Chorus: B: Listen There something I gotta say before I'm at my last breath On my dying day... Repeat Chorus: [This message has been edited by Hallucination (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I REALLY like this!! I could almost hear it!!! I think it will be a great song  |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
i think this is very well written, based on actual emotions you have. good luck in putting some noise on this |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Like the words and I think it will sounds marvelous upon music too.......wish you succes with doing that. Charisma |
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