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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-12-10 09:44 PM



This Time

~*Marge Tindal*~

This time will be forever
Our love has room to grow
This time - Oh, baby, this time
I just need for you to know
I'm gonna love you better
this time~

Forever in love with you
is where I'm meant to be
So this time - Oh baby, this time
I'm gonna love you ... foreverly~


For the wonderful man in my life~
December 10, 2001

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2001-12-10 09:47 PM


Oh Marge....you are soooooo goood at writing
like this....all the time...not just this
time.

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2 posted 2001-12-10 09:48 PM




(sigh) Oh Marge, this is sooooooo romantic, your love is going to love you forever...ever after! (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet Marge, I always love your expressions of love! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-10 09:54 PM


...and don't leave me NEVERLY!!!

I'll read you foreverly willingly!!  

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4 posted 2001-12-10 09:54 PM



I really like this, it flows well and it's so wonderfully sweet. I have always believed that soulmates exist - and, I'm sure you agree too.
You wear love well, and, I hope that it's contagious - heaven knows that I need some inspiration to start writing those romantic poems again  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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5 posted 2001-12-10 09:55 PM


Oh Marge!  You do write romance soooo well.
Beautiful!  Hugs, Nancy.  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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6 posted 2001-12-10 10:14 PM


Marge, I am so glad you have a man in your life who you can love foreverly...wonderful poem. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2001-12-10 10:14 PM


Magnus~
Thank you always for the kindest replies~
I so appreciate your comments~

Noah~
Thank you very much~

Balladeer~
You are such a 'dear' deer~
I'll always write this little heart for you to read~
Love you ... *hug*

Melissa~
Thanks for the read.

Enchantress~
Oh, dear lady ... This time I'm living it~
Thank you, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jwesley
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8 posted 2001-12-10 10:17 PM


Plum Proud to know you have that kind of love Marge...wonderful, lovingly done write that would make any receiver proud.


jwesley

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9 posted 2001-12-10 10:20 PM


StarTime~
Oh, thank you, gal ... I love being in love ...
Just keeps getting better with time~
*Hugs*

JWesley~
Thank you my friend ... I'm so happy~
I like 'plum proud' ...  
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2001-12-10 10:25 PM


simply loverly!!!!
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11 posted 2001-12-10 10:31 PM


Doreen~
Thank you ... sincerely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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12 posted 2001-12-10 10:41 PM


Margie girl sweet sister of my soul, Yes doesn't love feel wonderful  

Fabulous writing and utterly wonderfully well written. Yes darling girl Love does suit you, Margie girl go for it.  
    
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
    

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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13 posted 2001-12-10 10:46 PM


Shucks Marge what a let down. Hugs and kisses
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14 posted 2001-12-10 11:45 PM



Marge-
   I just LOVE this...'mush' looks good on you.
   Now...where IS that guitar man when you
   need him...this really does read like a song.
   Smiling at your happiness, sweetest friend.
   Love and hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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15 posted 2001-12-10 11:56 PM


Shockingly beautiful, Marge...Your happiness shines through every line...
and I am very happy for you too!
     

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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16 posted 2001-12-11 04:23 AM


Very beautiful
You do wonderful things with your mind and pen.

((((HUGS))))

God Bless You
~Timothys Angel

*Whatever souls are made of...his and mine are of the same*  ~Emily Bronte'

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17 posted 2001-12-11 06:22 AM


This is lovely! It reads more like the chorus of a wonderful song!   enjoyed!  

I am many.

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2001-12-11 09:01 AM


MarshaLove~
Feels plum 'mushy' .. and lovely~
Yes, it is the greatest feeling of the heart~
Thank you, hon~

Seymour~
LOL ...  Me wuv you too~

Vicky~
Of all the 'sharers' in the world ...
I can't think of another I love to share so much with
- you know the all of me~
Thank you, sweetest friend~

Lyra~
Thanks so much for the lovely compliment~

Tima~
I appreciate that.  Thanks for letting me know~

Siofra~
Thank you for hearing my heart sing~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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