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The Door To Your Heart
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The Door To Your Heart |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Many times I have travelled This lonesome country road As I carry upon my back My heavy emotional load This load is such a burden That I've carried so very far As the full moon lights my way And I follow my guiding star Upon the forest floor I shall rest The pine needles will be my bed I don't expect to get much sleep As I wonder where I'm lead I'll tackle the raging river And climb the highest mountain peak As I gaze down towards the valley For your love is what I seek The warm winds will carry away This emotional load from my back As I feel my burden lifted While I search for the right track I'm hoping the next road leads me Straight to the door of your loving heart And in time we'll be together And nothing will ever keep us apart Suetang [This message has been edited by Suetang (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And when you knock, I hope you find all your dreams inside... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue....I agree with Karilea....I hope so too. Nicely done. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
I feel that finding love, every burden you have seems to disappear. Thgese burdens are replaced with care and good times. Just one of the great things love can do. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Sue! I hope all your dreams come true! ~Hugs, Nancy~  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, such yearning fills these words! (sigh) You have such a loving heart and deserve the most beautiful love that will take you to the door to eternal happiness! (sigh) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend! I always love your words! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  may love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
The "emotional load" and the road..... Ah....many can relate to this....I know I do. A heartfelt beautiful write..... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
And when the door opens you will have someone to share the emotional load with making it much lighter. BRAVO!!!A wonderful poem. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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