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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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0 posted 2001-12-10 08:21 PM


How we move so well together
In front of the firelight
Such a perfectly romantic setting
I could stay here with you all night

You touch me so exquisitely
As you ignite my inner soul
To give you the very best of my love
Is certainly my ultimate goal

I'll place one of my tender kisses
Upon your warm inviting lips
Just as long as you promise
To move slowly above my hips

My desire is slowly burning
Just like an ember in the flame
As we begin our night of passion
And proceed to play love's game

A roll of love's dice
Reveals the number four
As you tenderly lower me
Down towards the floor

Now my turn to throw the dice
And I reveal the number one
This signals that our sweet loving
Has really only just begun

Our hearts will beat in unison
As we wake to greet the sun
Our game of love is not over
Until these two souls become one

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-10 08:26 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) What a beautiful and creative game of eternal love! May you forever melt as one in happiness! (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet Sue, I always love your tender words! (kiss on cheek) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2001-12-10 10:06 PM


Suetang,

   Ahh this is the best kind of game isn't it?   Very much enjoyed  

Hugs,
Tara


"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-10-2001).]

Larry C
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3 posted 2001-12-11 12:21 PM


Sue,
You know the only cold showers I've taken here have been because of rwood. But this was hot...I'll be back!  

Siofra
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4 posted 2001-12-11 03:58 AM


Beautiful!  

I am many.

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
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england
5 posted 2001-12-11 05:51 AM




Thank you for you poem
bye the way
I believe that 2 is also an excellent number when playing this game
arthur

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08
Posts 288
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6 posted 2001-12-11 04:39 PM


Romance is the best kind of fun, and I'm loving this poem.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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