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0 posted 2001-12-10 04:40 PM



You… God’s Gift

It will always completely amaze me,
this love you offer me eternally.
The gift of your love carries me so high.
My heart forever lost in love’s sweet sigh.

Your soft whispers gently caress my ear.
My soul feels safe with you just being near.
Our minds, bodies and souls are connected
with a love only God has selected.

By your side is where I’ll always be found.
The strength and bond of our love will astound.
Our souls will grow and learn, becoming one.
Off to our own paradise we will run.

God has given me the gift that is you.
Etched in the stars above before I knew.



"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-10-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-10 04:46 PM


awww...to be adored like that.    Lovely, sweet friend.  I know Dave will be thrilled.    (((hugs)))

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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2 posted 2001-12-10 04:48 PM




(sigh) Oh Tara, you are soooooooo romantic, this is sooooooo beautiful! (smiles) God's gift not only shines in the stars but also deep down in each lovers golden heart! (smiles) I love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) May this gift of joy last eternally! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-10 04:57 PM


TARA! For you to find such a love and for such a talent to express that love!! Many hugs go out to you, Dave you truly are a lucky man! And Tara you truly are enchanted!

Hugs to you my bestest friend! XOXOX
Ter.  

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

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4 posted 2001-12-10 04:59 PM


God has truly blessed you.  Joyce
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5 posted 2001-12-10 05:01 PM


*sigh* a beautiful sonnet from a heart that is giving and receiving true love. Magnificent. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2001-12-10 11:57 PM


believe it or not, folks, i actually do know how lucky i am.
tara, my dear, i am speechless.
don't worry,
soon enough i'll get over it, and dispense another dose of rampantly overblown verbosity which ultimately boils down to "awwwwww, you too."
seee?
now look what you made me do.
:P
i love you honey.
-Dave

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7 posted 2001-12-11 04:03 PM


Auguste - Thank you for stopping in.  I'm glad you liked it.

Noah - Once again such a sweet reply. What a wonderful heart you have   Thank you.

Terry -   Thank you dear.   I am one of the luckiest people alive to find Dave and his love.. I will always be thankful and grateful for that.

Joyce - I am very blessed   Thank you for stopping to read.

Karen -   I'm glad you liked it.  What can I say.. Dave's love inspires me in more ways than I can say. *hugs* right back to you.

Dave - *chuckles* I love you when you ramble and I love you when you're speechless my dear.  I just love you forever.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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8 posted 2001-12-11 04:40 PM


Your feelings of deepest love flow outward
from the page...There is not a shred of
doubt left...Nicely done.

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