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If I Had You
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If I Had You |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
If I Had You By: Noah Eaton 3/29/01 Years pass me by, staring at your beauty in my dreams You are everything to me, and how I want everything fervently Wanting so badly to sit beside you for once, and see you smile Even if it was just for a little while If I had you, I promise that I would never let you go, honey I would recite my poetry to you, and hope you want to forever be with me I would sit under the stars with you, and I could look into your crystalline eyes And I could catch that spark of affection, feel your lovely light It never felt too bad running on empty Until I first dreamed of you, my darling It is so aggravating feeling your love but being hoodwinked by fantasy You’re a beautiful angel I still can’t reach, praying God will help you find me If I had you, I would hold you close, listening to every word you say I would carry you in my arms, tuck you into bed, and my love for you would never fade away I would whisper those three words to you before you fall asleep I would kiss you on your forehead and softly caress your silkened cheeks Oh love, how I’ve dreamed of you for so so long Falling in complete happiness with you, and then you are gone I hope the time is near, when I can feel your love so true Can you hear me say, “I love you!” If I had you, I would hold your hands and we would dance together We’d never have to cry or long for each other again, never ever And whenever you would feel sick, sad, or dilapidated I will always be there beside you, comforting you, sharing a mutual understanding If I had you, I would hold you in my arms, kissing each other Feeling your warm body over mine, making love to each other as true happy lovers And every night after, I would keep you warm as I cover you with my sheets While your warm body keeps me warm at night, your soft hands over me If I had you…I would love you [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Noah Very sweet and romantic!Nice job! Stevie |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,no prettier words were ever spoken.This is a perfect love poem.    Juanita |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Aww! This poem is soooo sweet, and soooo romantic! Whatever girl you're talking about is very lucky to have someone like you. Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful words of love! Your expression deeply felt, a longing so muchly anticipated! I pray you feel her touch, her skin against yours, for then your words will truly be felt in your heart. HUGS Ter.  Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And what more could she ask for...James |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
Lot of longing in this one, Noah. Carol Luna |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I hope she is yours soon, Noah. And all you ever dreamt of. Sandra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Noah You deserve such a special love and I hope you find her soon. This was beautiful. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully penned sweet Noah! *kisses to you under the mistletoe*  Nancy "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
This really seems like you could put it to music...*smiles*...I've read a couple of your poems now and they all have that thus far. Was that your intent? If not, please don't be offended. I LOVE music and I do mean it as a compliment, really. P.S. Crystalline is a GREAT word, isn't it?? hehehe |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are a true gentleman, romantic all around through and through, any woman would be lucky to have YOU |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
Noah, you are a beautiful poet. Your work is amazing. I only wish I could express myself in such a harmonious way. You are truly talented. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
WOW!!! |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Noah, What a lovely, heartfelt sentiment! Your soul holds such beauty ... we all can only dream of love like this. I wish you the best in your life and love. You deserve everything good that comes your way! ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah, Beautiful write.Your words have such longing and desire in them.I hope you find her soon.You have a beautiful heart and I enjoy seeing it very much. Peaches |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
 Amazing! Absolutely amazing! It brought tears to my eyes, I so know what you are (were) going through. Its so hard when you love someone SOOOO much but they don't know it/return it and its too scary to express it to that special someone. i wish you all the luck in the world, and that one day you get to read this poemto your love.-R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain [This message has been edited by rebekah33 (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Noah, Well your poetry brought out lot's of emotions and thats what it's all about, and this will sure to be shared some day with the one that truly deserves you, your loving heart shines in this beauty, enjoyed truly. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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mysti New Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 3 |
This poem is very touching. The kind of love and devotion alot of us wish for. Thanks so much for sharing |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Sigh~ this is soooooo sweet and tender. She is certainly a lucky lady....  And you have a heart so beautifully filled with romance..... Thank you sweet Noah ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
You are a beautiful and kind soul Noah..truly an angel on earth..hugss...a lovely write as always ~Victoria~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, you are all the best friends one could ever have! I love you all! (big hugggssssss Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I love it, love it, love it! Great job, Noah! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
This is a beautiful sensitive poem, I wish you well in your search for that love.Happy holidays by the way and thanks for your kind words on my poems. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Just the perfect way to love. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, Well I know I'm dilapidated but you didn't have to say I'm sick as well!. lol. Lovely poem, sweet and sensitive. *Kiss on the cheek* Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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