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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-12-10 11:13 AM

Tell me
(Where I can find a love)
Love that would last,
Tell me
(If love Is strong enough
to lift my heart up)
Tell me,
If today the words I say)
Would take my heart away,
Tell me
(if there Is a heart
to show the way
to my heart,
Tell me
(If true love would find a heart)
to tell me
how love is?
Tell me
(Where you can find a heart
to seee through)
Tell me
(If love Is meant to be)
Tell me
(Where heart can find a song Into It)
Tell me
(If love).....
The love would last,
Tell me,
If the time would go by fast
Tell me,
(if it is true)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-10 11:19 AM

(sigh) Oh Vandana, you are soooooooo romantic, this is soooooooo beautiful! (sigh) Your soft yearning fills these words, and I know deep down with all my heart the most beautiful love awaits you and will fill your golden heart with true loves joy and eternal happiness! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet Vandana, dreams can come true, for love is meant to be! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, I loved it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

2 posted 2001-12-10 08:02 PM

Vandana,alot of serious questions about love.But its for sure it is out there.Enjoyed this!

;bounce:

Juanita

Carol Luna
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 55

3 posted 2001-12-10 08:03 PM

It is rare but it does exist, this is sad.

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

4 posted 2001-12-10 11:59 PM

very nice Vandana, I liked your poem very much.

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

5 posted 2001-12-11 06:59 AM

I liked reading this poem a lot.
It reminds me of the love songs
on the radio.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

6 posted 2001-12-11 07:48 AM

When you find out, will you let me know?

enjoyed!

I am many.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-12-11 06:16 PM

And if you find out..let me know...such an
intriguing poem...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-12-11 10:44 PM

well done my friend. . .

your style is developing into something very unique every day. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-12-11 10:48 PM

I think most of us are searching for the answers to these questions. I hope someday we can get the answers we want. A wonderful, heartfelt poem. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2001-12-12 06:01 PM

I hope you will find your answers one day...enjoyed reading it

Charisma

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