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Larry C

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0 posted 2001-12-10 12:44 PM

My Daughter’s Prayer
By Larry Chadwick

Every night she knelt beside her bed,
My daughter would say her prayer.
She prayed for mommy and daddy,
And for her brother to learn to share.

Then she’d hop under the covers,
And daddy would kiss her cheek.
“Don’t let the bed bugs bite.”
Lights out, I’d take another peek.

But after daddy was for sure gone,
She would climb back out of bed.
Slip to her knees and pray once more,
Talking to Jesus this is what she said:

“Jesus, my daddy is still in school,
The car we drive isn’t very good.
So tomorrow when I get out of bed,
I want a Firebird with the eagle on the hood.”

Now she was only five years old,
She knew Jesus answered prayers.
It was the same routine every night,
And a dash to the door to see if it was there.

I know because she confessed to me,
The truth of these events this year.
So twenty-two years have gone by,
And Christmas is drawing near.

I’ve already done my holiday shopping,
And it has really been so much fun.
So it’s wrapped and finally in the box,
Off to Fed Ex and my work is done.

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-10-2001).]

Duncan
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1 posted 2001-12-10 12:51 PM

Well, a real Firebird wouldn't fit in a box, so did you get her a model? Sweet poem, Larry. Sounds like you have a wonderful family.

Larry C

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2 posted 2001-12-10 12:54 PM

Duncan,
Gotta say, if I made lots of money it would be a real one! And thanks, I am so blessed with a wonderful family!

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

RosePetal

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3 posted 2001-12-10 01:00 AM

Aww so precious! You are a great father Larry! Have safe and happy holidays!

Midnitesun

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4 posted 2001-12-10 01:01 AM

OK, so will a cyber hug make do? Here it is, just for you, my sweet friend.

You are the extra lump of sugar in my tea.

Larry C

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5 posted 2001-12-10 01:05 AM

RosePetal,
Thanks! And from what I hear you're a pretty special girl too.

Kacy,
I'll take whatever you're giving. And yup I'll melt in your tea too! Thanks.

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

Midnitesun

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6 posted 2001-12-10 01:08 AM

You are more than welcome. But please don't melt in my cup! How will I find you the next day? I want one of those perpetual sugar cubes...I'm sure they must exist somewhere.

Larry C

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7 posted 2001-12-10 01:14 AM

Kacy,
I'm forever sweet! Does that count?

Did you hear about Marge's contest being fixed?

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-10-2001).]

Kit McCallum

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8 posted 2001-12-10 07:33 AM

Ah Larry ... a wonderful story, filled with warmth and love! This was so sweet, very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Larry C

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9 posted 2001-12-10 09:56 AM

Thanks Kit! I just learned this story from my daughter and had no idea.

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

Auguste

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10 posted 2001-12-10 02:18 PM

A plastic model of one, perhaps?

Wow, gotta love a Firebird!

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Martie

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11 posted 2001-12-10 03:19 PM

Larry--The sweet love shown in this poem of heart, made me smile. Thank you.

Larry C

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12 posted 2001-12-10 03:27 PM

Auguste,
Your 2000th Post on my poem! Wow! Actually a metal model that the hood and doors open and the wheels turn. But gotta love a Firebird.

Martie,
Love it is!

Thanks.

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

N orth Carolina Girl
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13 posted 2001-12-10 05:04 PM

Larry,this was so sweet.My son wanted a pt cruiser one time so I bought him a small one.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Larry C

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14 posted 2001-12-10 05:20 PM

Juanita,
Never mind that my daughter was expecting to get the real thing! Fun to have kids with dreams.

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

Mistletoe Angel

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15 posted 2001-12-10 05:23 PM

(sigh) You are a very loving and beautiful father, sweet Larry, she is so happy and lucky to have you always! (sigh) God Bless you boith, and may your prayers and dreams come true! I wish you both the happiest holidays! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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16 posted 2001-12-10 05:27 PM

*giggling* I love this poem and how your responded to your daughter's prayer. What a delightful man you are. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Rogue24
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17 posted 2001-12-10 05:46 PM

Wonderful story! A firebird, at five even! At five I think I wanted my own room! LoL

Thank you for sharing this with us!
Cheers!
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

sodpossom
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18 posted 2001-12-10 06:58 PM

Very enjoyable story.

Balladeer

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19 posted 2001-12-10 08:13 PM

Well done, Larry! You are all truly blessed...sincere holiday wishes to you all

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

20 posted 2001-12-10 08:27 PM

Larry this one was very touching!
A lovely holiday post.
You are very blessed indeed.
Season's Greetings to you and your Nancy Lee.
....and the rest of the pit crew.

*Kisses under the mistletoe, Nancy Lee*

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Suetang
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21 posted 2001-12-10 09:05 PM

Larry
Such a beautiful picture you have painted here through your words. The great love you have for your daughter is so very evident.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Larry C

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22 posted 2001-12-10 10:41 PM

Mistletoe Angel,
Thanks Noah. You are always so kind. Happy Holidays!

Karen,
Wish I had known sooner and wish I could have answered it. Oh well...

Ter,
Me...I just wanted to be married! We're a hopeless lot. LOL Thanks.

Sod,
Thanks and love the happy face.

Micael,
You are so right! Thanks and Happy Holidays to you and yours.

Nancy Lee,
How did I miss the mistle toe?

Happy Holidays to all at your house.

Sue,
Thank you so much. Happy Holidays.

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

vlraynes
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23 posted 2001-12-11 12:33 PM

Larry-
   Such a sweet story, and you've penned it well.
   Thanks for sharing this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Larry C

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24 posted 2001-12-11 12:49 PM

Vicky,
Thanks for stopping by.

Midnitesun

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25 posted 2001-12-11 12:51 PM

WAHH! I wanna FIREBIRD TOO! Actually, a little 4wd anybrandwilldo pickup would be nice about now.

Larry C

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26 posted 2001-12-11 12:53 PM

Kacy,
I'd settle for a new justaboutanything! LOL

Rattle and Hum, eh?

Midnitesun

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27 posted 2001-12-11 01:18 AM

Yes. Rattle and Hum. One of U2's best albums. And what about Keith Jarrett? Concert at Koln? Jarrett is a classical and jazz piano virtuoso.
Yep, anewanythingaboutnow.

Larry C

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28 posted 2001-12-11 01:27 AM

Kacy,
What part of the jazz section would I find that in? LOL

Siofra

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29 posted 2001-12-11 06:31 AM

This is precious!

I love your work, Sir.

I am many.

Larry C

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30 posted 2001-12-11 09:57 AM

Siofra,
Thanks! It doesn't seem your passion is suspended.

Madame Chipmunk
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31 posted 2001-12-11 12:34 PM

A very special story, Larry...and very beautifully written.
It sounds like your daughter is a very lucky girl...even if the car does fit into a box.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Larry C

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32 posted 2001-12-11 12:46 PM

Madame Chipmunk,
LOL Thanks, that was fun. By the way, did I tell you I used to live in Michigan? Hope you have snow for Christmas!

Tracey
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33 posted 2001-12-11 11:31 PM

What a sweet daughter you have there. You'll have to let us know what she says when she opens it. I bet it brings a tear to someone, and probably both of you.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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34 posted 2001-12-12 12:09 PM

Larry, I loved this! I have heard some GOOD prayers as the 5 kids were growing up. Sometimes I really wanted to "help" God and answer faster, but He seemed to know what He was doing. I know she will love the gift no matter what it is. What memories you have brought back. Hugs, ME

Larry C

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35 posted 2001-12-12 12:36 PM

Tracey,
Thanks Trace and a report you shall get!

Mother Earth,
Aren't kids just the best. Wish I'd had more like you...

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