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walker
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0 posted 2001-12-09 10:44 PM



How do you heal
what cannot be seen
How do you cure
what cannot bleed
Love what an emotion
that breaks the heart in
miniscule pieces
and some parts are lost forever
Even if you try to mend it
you'll never feel the same
Love what a bittersweet seduction
Love what a tease
To let you feel the love
so deep
and just take off
forever

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-09 10:50 PM


most painful and yet so wanted...love is quite complicated....*sigh* I don't know if you are writing of your own ache or not, but if you are (((hugs))) I hope you find healing  
Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-09 11:04 PM


*sigh* yes, it is. Something so very desired and so hard to find...and when we think we have found it we just find out it was fantasy. My heart goes out to you...I know your pain. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-10 12:08 PM


I know this feeling too well. ((Hugs to you)) I hope you aren't experiencing this!
Love is tricky, love is blind

Duncan
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4 posted 2001-12-10 01:11 AM


Even if you try to mend it
you'll never feel the same

It does lose something once it needs mending.  Up to us to determine how many stitches are worth our time and effort, especially if they are just to be ripped out again.

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5 posted 2001-12-10 01:22 AM


walker,
Sounds like the voice of experience to me. So much truth. But some how the rewards out weight the risks and the pain.  

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

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6 posted 2001-12-10 01:26 AM


A sad one, and yet, it is a true part of love. Mending broken seams never seems to bring it back to the whole of what it was.
At least, that's the way it was for me.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-12-10 04:38 AM


I tend to find myself getting too desperate while reaching for love when perhaps I should be reaching for friendships and letting love happen in its due time...
James

Domzi
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8 posted 2001-12-10 06:35 PM


I know this feeling, but it gets better with age!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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9 posted 2001-12-10 06:39 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, I can feel the sorrow behind your words! Love can indeed be quite a bittersweet experience, but love is also a beautiful feeling, and as long as we listen to what makes our heart happy, our dreams, love is meant to be! (sigh) My heart is with you, sweet friend, I wish for the most beautiful love to fill your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2001-12-10 07:15 PM


You have written well the emotions that
many of us at one time or another have felt.
Sometimes very very deeply....

Enchantress
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11 posted 2001-12-10 07:48 PM


Walker...very well done!  Excellent write!
Hugs, Nancy.  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Carol Luna
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12 posted 2001-12-10 08:02 PM


yes, I felt the emotion in this...oh yes

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

Honeybee
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13 posted 2001-12-10 10:10 PM



I know all too well how this feels - you write it so vividly!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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