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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-12-09 10:31 PM



I want to hear a love song
tonight
one that gets to my heart
And drink a strong drink
to clear my broken heart
With tears on my eyes
I depart from this love
Too shattered for hope
Too confused to be loved or love
Bartender
give the love potion
I need
to heal my broken heart
Then I will
tell you about a great love
that I lost
after great battles
to conquer it
after great storms
And my friend
my sadness will follow me
forever even in dreams
it will not leave me
until the day I rest in peace

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 12-09-2001).]

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with you
1 posted 2001-12-09 10:38 PM


this is painful and so sad. Hope you are ok  
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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2 posted 2001-12-09 11:14 PM


*sigh* I know the feeling. My heart shares your pain....**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-12-10 01:57 AM


Too shattered for hope
Too confused to be loved or love

When it gets to this point, you know as I do, that it is time to move on.
And also...easier said than done.
In the meantime, race you to the bar...drinks are on me.  Literally, spilled 'em all over myself.  See there, made you laugh.
It's all good, walker, it's all for something, though we may not know what, yet.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2001-12-10 02:17 AM


walker - sad, and very telling. There is a price to pay, not only for a loved one, but for everything. Some prices are just a little higher than others. Best to you...

BC

crazy4u
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since 2001-10-28
Posts 67

5 posted 2001-12-10 02:33 AM


Hope can't be drowned by the love potion.  This takes me to the bar with you...
xoxo

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