Simple Explanations To Questions You Didn't Ask

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Open Poetry #17

Simple Explanations To Questions You Didn't Ask

Doug Pretorius
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since 2001-04-08

Posts 81
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-12-09 07:48 PM

Simple Explanations To Questions You Didn't Ask
December 9, 2001
Copyright 2001 Doug Pretorius

    Now has been my constant companion
  Red like the wind and soft in disguise
Superceded by some unrecognizable eyes

Sickly sinking feeling's size
  Chasing fellow sin's hypnotize
    Fought through open-ended abandon

    Timing indent slipped through thing
  Chimes defined inside-out to bring
cold-pressed Cossack mill refine

Soaked indiscriminated soul line
  To toast a toast to my final ring
    In this chaffed wind to you sing

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2001-12-09 08:40 PM

~I keep reading and rereading this. I could never bore of such wording(wow) and clever construction. The message drips itself through every line in the glass. *Peace.

Doug Pretorius
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since 2001-04-08

Posts 81
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-12-09 09:51 PM

Thanks SpitFire, glad you liked

Doug

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