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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-09 06:50 PM


Eyes Raining Tears

My sight is blurred
as feelings heard
Such heartfelt loss
fills every word

My heart constricts
to see your pain
Wishing to heal
for love again

Rivers run free
from heart and soul
Feeling helpless
to give console

Your pain I feel
within my breast
Eyes raining tears
praying what's best

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2001-12-09 07:00 PM


Karen - another most telling writing you have written. A soft word from me to you, for one of tears...

BC

Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-09 07:03 PM


**hugs** you have no idea how much that means to me, right now. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-12-09 07:03 PM






(big huggssssss) Such compassion fills these soft sad but beautiful words! (sigh) May these tears of sadness become tears of golden hope! (sigh) Soooooo touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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4 posted 2001-12-09 07:06 PM


Karen,
Nothing beats a friend who can see our pain. Nice write.  

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

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5 posted 2001-12-09 07:08 PM


*wipes Karen's tears away* Just remember sweetie, that something postive always comes out of something negative! **Hugs**


RP

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6 posted 2001-12-09 07:17 PM


Ah Karen....Another lovely yet sad write.
~hugs from me to you, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2001-12-09 08:24 PM


Another great one, Karen....
I don't know what inspired it...but I certainly hope everything is better now...
Poetry is the best therapy I know of...

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus
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8 posted 2001-12-09 08:58 PM


Karen,

Your words touch my heart deeply...Know that
you will always have a friend..A friend who
will listen,  and care..

rosepetals25
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9 posted 2001-12-09 09:15 PM


Karen,

      I do like your writing. You emotions always come across so painfully clear. I hope everything is ok with you.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

SmartChick
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10 posted 2001-12-09 09:27 PM


This is beautiful.
Irish Rose
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11 posted 2001-12-09 11:11 PM


You have such a compassionate heart, Karen, this is beautiful.

Kathleen (Kay)
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Laurie Lee

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
12 posted 2001-12-09 11:21 PM




Such a heartfelt beautiful write...

thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Eloise
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13 posted 2001-12-09 11:33 PM


Karen, your emotions come through on this beautiful write.  Hope all is well.
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