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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-12-09 06:31 PM






(This is dedicated to my sweet angelic friend Kim)

Angelic Radiance
By: Noah Eaton
12/9/01

Amid the silver clouds shielding Luna’s face
A warm smile projects from an angel’s gaze
Shrouds of feathers blanket a child as she sleeps
Her eyes are hemmed with gossamer stars which she receives

She holds a Bible under her arm, bookmarked with a blue rose
Syringe of faith perforating the unrest that encumbers below
Her caresses her cotton cheek with a glove of porcelain
Curfews compensated for promises sparkling within

And the angel whispers in her ear, “I will spread my wings,
And guide you with all my heart’s content and make you all you can be!”
Fear not, your spirit will always rest in Hands of Light
Your wings shall be brandished in bronze, bringing love to many eyes

So the angel spreads her wings, wearing the northern lights like a scarf
Wearing the stars like a nightgown, swaying embers afar
Resting another gentle spirit in His carriage
Holding loves notion to devotion, reflecting the light’s prowess

In the night the angel took flight
Offering guidance to each and every spirit blithe
Loves spirit singing from a child’s soul
In the arms of an angel, shining pure as gold


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-09-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-09 06:40 PM


Stunningly beautiful, Noah. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-09 06:40 PM


Ooohhh this is heavenly! Very very beautiful gem you've penned here!



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3 posted 2001-12-09 06:50 PM


Noah, what a beautiful Christmas story you have penned for us here.
YOU have a pure heart and a very giving, loving nature.  
~Hugs sweetie! Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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4 posted 2001-12-10 02:39 PM


Beautiful!
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-12-10 02:47 PM


"So the angel spreads her wings, wearing the northern lights like a scarf
Wearing the stars like a nightgown, swaying embers afar
Resting another gentle spirit in His carriage
Holding loves notion to devotion, reflecting the light’s prowess"

Oh my ... such beautiful description Noah!  Lovely imagery and phrasing, I very much enjoyed this wonderful piece!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2001-12-10 02:57 PM


This is very nice Noah...James
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7 posted 2001-12-10 03:04 PM


thank you for sharing this beautiful gem my dear friend, love it very much  

(((hugs))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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8 posted 2001-12-10 05:11 PM


Such imagery I would expect on a canvas you have brought before our eyes in words. Bravo! You truly have a talent for write! HUGS!
Ter.

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9 posted 2001-12-10 05:15 PM


You are amazing, Noah.  Joyce
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10 posted 2001-12-10 09:34 PM


Ah, Noah, another poem which shows your true talent in the poetry world.  The description is very nice.  Keep up the good work my friend!

     Randy Meador

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11 posted 2001-12-11 10:13 AM


This is tender and very beautiful write Noah....thanks for sharing!

Nathan

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