navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #17 » Phantom Lover
Open Poetry #17
Post A Reply Post New Topic Phantom Lover Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-12-09 06:04 PM


Phantom Lover

I gaze in eyes that flash with fire
entranced by scorching heat
Such lustful visions they inspire
locked in this dream so sweet

Strong arms hold me in hot embrace
as flames flow in our veins
With burning lips his face I trace
and drink wine kiss contains

With gentle touch he lets me know
feelings from deep within
His soft caress sets me aglow
as a flush lights my skin

A deep moan from inside is heard
to him I surrender
A phantom lover much preferred
with his touch so tender

Karen Torbiak 2001©


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2001-12-09 06:48 PM


Karen - how this one got to the second page is, ???? This is most beautiful, and deserves a little more response...

BC

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2001-12-09 06:52 PM


**hugs** thank you, Bill. I am so glad you liked it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-12-09 06:56 PM


Good grief!  Where this one went so fast is beyond me!  And...you know how much I love your tales of the Phantom Lover!!  hugs.  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

rosepetals25
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Elite
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076
PA
4 posted 2001-12-09 09:31 PM


Karen,

    I'm glad Bill found this one and brought it back to the top   I love this.. you write so well  

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

timothysangel1973
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Senior Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725
Never close enough
5 posted 2001-12-09 09:46 PM


Very beautifully written Startime....

I really like your work

Till next time...
Timothys angel

Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something.  ~Pancho Villa

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #17 » Phantom Lover

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary