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During Storms Winding Down
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During Storms Winding Down |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Almost a temper raised fight with dreams in toss it seems as if I couldn't be any more inclined to tremble as I am at this moment. So just ramble with me slow down, thought leave me to the dispair I feel settling over me like a cold morning on sleepy skin. This time I know not why slumber takes me in except to hold me cradle me and hide me away for the next meeting in the stars of winter skies. Just when I had been enjoying the season I was hit and I stumbled but I got back up dusted the hoplessness and doubt from the strong back I have been cursed with and I stopped falling once more just floating now to let the days have me. But NO! I don't want to drift for there are shores of nightmares I have been all to familiar with while sifting through clouds with the wind in my face. I forgave the slap of wind I was blinded by only to know that there was another kind of pain just waiting up ahead. and I now, sit here wondering how right it is to feel so down and do not care no I do not care and yet I do and yet I DO NOT WANT TO DRIFT and I do not want to doubt, but how could I not doubt when there is so much hope for enemies? Oh Please I don't want to drift to be drained of all my light to dwell where shadows drink every night unwittingly being their intoxication of choice. I want a light please just me huddling here and hiding and I want a light the one I dropped the one that I lost when my kindess stopped. I want a light but I don't want yours! Weak batteries have been my dispair and I do not need another week battery cluttering up my soul. and I DON'T WANT BATTERIES ANYWAY! I want a natural powered beam where the sunshine infuses itself and bleeds out through my smile. But for now I'm giving up again and maybe tomorrow I'll forgive myself for loving and living too much and maybe the next day forgive you and the next forgive them. but for now I'm giving up and do you really want to follow me down .....here..... ????????????? I am many. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Siofra, this is soooooooo emotionally well-written! (sigh) May you embrace the pure sunlight always, and dance to the pure light of love that your golden heart reflects! (sigh) Your beautiful heart always shines with love, and love never needs batteries! (sigh) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Siofra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
siofra, you have a unique rambling style full of imagery. I haven't read you until now and i'll look for more. nice flow to this..... i followed you down the whole page....a lot of good imagery. good job!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a flow that takes the reader along with them. . . from beginning to end. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Such storms of pain and hurt from nightmares both past and present. Magnificent!!! **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Lots of vivid imagery, Siofra Just beautiful.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I really felt the emotion in this, I mean I really did. Yes, I followed you all the way down the page also. It spoke to me. Kathleen (Kay) |
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