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0 posted 2001-12-08 11:34 PM



When sunlight falls,
my Rainbow Dancing Lights
shine for you.


In restless dreams and fitful sleep
My shadow dancer teases me, implores me
To arise and run through the shadows of midnight
On a quest for the essence of Love's pure delight
Aurora, you are the Queen of the Night.

And when Aurora's Dancing Rainbow Lights beckon,
I slip outside into frosted moonlit night,
hugging myself against the cold,
embracing the warm northern lights.
And I am suddenly embraced by moonbeams and starlight,
and brilliant splashes of Monet and Van Gogh
that pull my heart and soul to Love.

Neon colors fill the sky
and I cry out Love's wondrous song,
while Aurora reveals the secrets of the Universe.
And I dance through the night knowing that
all the secrets are within my heart,
for that's where I shall find true Love.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 12-08-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-08 11:38 PM




BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Kathleen, the scarf of the aurora lights wraps you in loves embrace! (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, I love the surreal visions you paint! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet Kathleen! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-08 11:39 PM


Ahhh those cold, clear, crisp wonderful nights with the rainbow shadows dancing across the darkened sky!!!!  Being born and raised in Alaska until just 2 years ago...I know those nights ohh so well!!! They're beautiful....The Northern Lights!!!! Something I haven't seen in Oregon as of yet!!!

Nice poem!!!

Bridgette  

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3 posted 2001-12-08 11:41 PM


I envy you that sight, sun. I would love to see it one day.....you paint it beautifully  
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4 posted 2001-12-08 11:46 PM


Noah, thank you so much! You always have such nice replies.  

Bridgette, so nice to have your reply! Ah, Eugene must be a bit warmer tonight. You know about these cold nights, tonight the low is at -35F, the high today was -27F. (I live just outside Fairbanks) It's been a few nights since I saw an aurora, the last one was pale green and lasted only 20 minutes or so, then disappeared...at least from my window. LOL I hardly ever go outside to see it when it dances in my window.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 12-08-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-12-08 11:50 PM


Balladeer, you snuck in while I was editing a typo on the reply to Bridgette.
Thank you! You are welcome to visit anytime. It's a little chilly tonight, -35F. I am not stepping outside unless I have to! Besides, I have the two moose camped in my yard again tonight, about 15 feet from my porch. They have been here every night for a week. Best to stay inside.

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6 posted 2001-12-09 12:52 PM


Midnitesun,
Gorgeous thoughts. You sure it wasn't moose that were used to escape that harem of long ago. I want to know how you stay warm at night. I have some ideas.  

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

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7 posted 2001-12-09 01:14 AM


LOL, Larry. So you remember my camel story?
Staying warm is easy...just stay indoors with an efficient heater, a bottle of wine or beer, good music, good poetry, and hot thoughts about a dream lover.
Is that what you imagined?

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8 posted 2001-12-09 12:42 PM


Midnitesun,
Actually, I was referring to being in bed. LOL It wouldn't be elctric blankets.  

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

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9 posted 2001-12-09 01:28 PM


I'm hoping to some day visit your neck of the woods and enjoy some of those wonderful sights.   I liked this very much, Kacy.  

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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10 posted 2001-12-09 02:46 PM


Larry, it's just me and the blankies,
and sometimes little dog Skippy crawls alongside. He thinks he's human.

Auguste, thanks for the reply. The views can be awesome, as can the weather.

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11 posted 2001-12-09 07:13 PM


MidniteSun~
You truly delight me with the lovely imagery in this piece~
Thank you so for your enthusiastic participation~
Love ya'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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12 posted 2001-12-09 08:07 PM


Thank you Marge, for all the fun and inspiration you generated with this challenge!   for YOU, MARGE.
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13 posted 2001-12-09 08:21 PM


It must be fun to see the Aurora Borealis for real.
Thanks for sharing it with us, Midnitesun.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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14 posted 2001-12-09 08:39 PM


Thanks, Lyra. Didn't you get to see the ones in your area in November? I heard they were dancing one night all the way into Arkansas, and with red and magenta colors I rarely see here.
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