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A Phantom's Love
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A Phantom's Love |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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A Phantom's Love Hear the rhythm of my heart beat as notes of passion play This song that's filled with lover's heat growing from day to day See the bright sparkle in my eyes a light inspired by you Unleash the thoughts that will arise desire you can't subdue Taste my lips dipped in reddest wine a timeless nectar, sweet Upon passion ripe fruit we'll dine food made for the elite Touch flesh to feel the burning flame a fire that will consume This need for you that will proclaim feelings shared I presume A phantom's love I will pursue in fantasy and dream Yet each morning when I bid adieu my eyes retain their gleam Karen Torbiak 2001© Dec. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is very beautiful, Karen. Kathleen (Kay) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Karen, I agree with Irish Rose.. beautiful  I like the flow Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your phantom lover may yet someday walk through that door. Will you be ready? |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
I found myself putting your write to song,  very seductive, very passionate! Very thot provoking! Hugs! Ter.  Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
This is a well written piece that sparkles with the poets talents of expression. It take the wine and makes it intoxicate you in the needs of feeding the emotions raised. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, as with your other phantom poems, this one takes my breath away as well. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The man of your dreams...may he visit you soon in the flesh. Hide nothing! This is gorgeous Karen. Mesmerizing indeed! Hugs! Sincerely, Regina |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhh Karen this is Wonderful penned.....love it very, very much!! Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, I found this while going back...I think it needs to be read again...nicely done. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
What a beautiful romantic dream, karen. I loved this one.     copyright2001 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (edited 12-11-2001).] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Excellent Karen. The flow of this just sings.  |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Karen,this is so romantic.I envy people who can write romantic poems.I guess I was just meant to do silly poems and poems about children   Juanita  |
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