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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2001-12-08 07:10 PM


Lets create the music that will make all of us tremble inside in intoxication.

The musical notes floated me upon the bliss of the heavens
In its sweetness the sounds of bees drew their nectar
Coiled up winds in circles of halos
Were set in motion to dangle in front of my wind chimes
Glancing on them in the breeze of angelic passions
In the gospels and hymns praises were sung

While the others struggled from the friend of hell
Whose horns the beast of the fire dragon survival depended
Threw whose suffering eyes music splashed
With blood soaked emotions of booze
The deadened sound loud blues awoke
Faithful watched
Their lips were trembling
As the crying of the cellar music started

As the fight over light and dark needed doctoring
A distorted mixture of organs and Saxes fought
In a the rhythmic blending of string upon brass
The revival rumbled its approval
The clouds started storming in thunder
With the music from heaven and earth striking their ways
In the chorus of endless hills of ears
Listening to the fireworks of vibrations
In an organic climax the storm subsided

And as the musicians lay wasted
The audience had risen so high
That there wings had been clipped with joy
By the magic that had send them flying
From some heaven and a little of hell
From two side playing as one
In a blend of intoxication of magical means

D.Lester Young (12/1/01)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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1 posted 2001-12-08 07:19 PM




(sigh) What a wonderful vision of the intoxication of good and evil in the world amalgamated together! (big hugggsssss) May His light shine through all and bring much love to all and bring a sweet intoxication of inspiration and hope for all our spirits to soar in love with wings spread out! (sigh) BRAVO!!! I'm so happy you're here, this Singing Sparrow sings happily in your verse! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet eagle, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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