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Heaven On Earth (3 part tanka)
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Heaven On Earth (3 part tanka) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Heaven On Earth The feel of your gaze Caresses this grateful heart That loves you so much I thank the heavens above For your never ending love Heaven here on earth When I hear your soft whispers Filling my heart with Gratitude, joy, hope, and strength How could I ever thank you The rest of my life Will be spent showing you just How much I love you Showing you how much I care Throughout this journey of life This is, of course, for my dear love Dave  "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-08-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (kiss on cheek) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, I love it!!! (smiles) You write tankas so beautifully, these are soooooo lovely! May you forever hold heaven here on earth! You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Tara! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah - Thank you my friend You are always so sweet  And.. where did you find those hearts  You always have the best smilies! lol"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
TARA you never cease to amaze me with your words ! such passion and adoration in your write! Love to you and everything that makes you a truly beautiful person! HUGS!! Cubby! Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I hope he realizes just what a treasure he has found in you. Just beautiful, Tara.  *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Here's the link to the site I get all those smileys and hearts from and post with my comments, sweet Tara! http://www.plauder-smilies.de/ Just click on any smiley you would like to use and then at the bottom of the screen, copy the UBB Code onto your message box and edit the code just as you would do with a Passions smiley code! (kiss on cheek) Have fun with them!!! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Cubby - Thank you I'm glad you liked it Michael - Like i've said before.. I am the lucky one. Dave is all I could ask for Thaks for coming to read Noah - Thank you!!! I think I had the link on my old puter... I will definately try them out "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Tara, You have such an angelic heart! You and Dave are the cutest lovebirds, Noah and I wish you both the best of luck and happiness always! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful Tara! Tanka, tanka, tanka. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
After reading these, I can't help but say "Awwwwwwwww!" Tanka very much for sharing these  It's good to see you in love  Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Tara - I would say this is beautiful, but then Lucie would jump all over me for being girlyfied and mushy. psst, Tara - It is really sweet |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and who else would it be for?? LOL wonderfully done Tara. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna -  aww .. thank you for your to kind replyNancy - *chuckles* Thank you for stopping in and reading. Melissa - *grins* Love is a good thing Thanks for coming and reading LngJhnAg - I promise I won't tell! *whispers* Thank you for your amusing yet sweet reply! Sven - LOL.. that is a good point..  Thanks for coming in "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
  tara, my dear, you never fail to astonish me. i am profoundly honored that you continue to allow me the privilege of your company.  joanna - hehe thanks y'all aren't too bad yerselves -Dave (who feels particularly inimitable today.) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is nice.....was it written for God???? Bridgette |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
ummmm. nope. sorry to disappoint bridgette just me, not god.but it could be worse. -Dave |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very nicely put! |
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