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You're back my Love
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You're back my Love |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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You're back my Love ~~~  A glowing fire sets the mood that burns within my veins I've dreamt of you a thousand times and at last you're here again ~ Its' gentle flicker cascades softly on beauty none can compare Your gentle voice inviting me your perfume thrills the air ~ The moment I've been waiting for now time has drained its' sands We drift a little closer I can feel you in my hands ~ My temples pound I cannot breathe your lips I press to mine ~ I shed a tear as I drain your soul ~ A smoother beer I shall never find ~~~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
YES!!!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles) I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) I love how you build up the passion all the way to the climax, when you're staring into your mug of beer! (smiles) Soooooooo clever, I love it! (big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rex, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I KNEW when I clicked in...it 'twern't going to be a serious one... too CUTE! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Rex...this is just too funny!  Thanks for the chuckles tonight. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I love it when a poem makes me laugh and this one sure did the trick. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL...Ok..I was ready for something sweet and romantic. But I guess if you LOVE your beer, it's romantic...LOL |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wow, I thought I was going to read something that they would kick to Adult. You are a man who knows what he loves. Very very good!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gotta love tha St. Pauli Girl, rex!!  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hehehe me likes this!!!! Very good!!!  Bridgette |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very good timing and the picture draws them in even further. |
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