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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2001-12-08 05:00 PM


I possess a fatal flaw,
I lack attention to love's call,
A lack of attention for your guided words,
My friend, my life has been absurd.

It wasn't wasy growing up,
Deaf to the holy grace of this world,
How true a human being you are,
Can you help me reach the stars?

Seeing how many kind people are here,
Does much good to quell these fears.

My friend, I'm trying to find myself,
It's a difficult thing, but I still have my health.
This condition that strays me from the path of truth,
tortures me every day.
but I pray, yes I pray,
to good Lord every night,
For I know I can always be with the light.

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

© Copyright 2001 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-12-08 05:33 PM




(big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! Yes you can, for your heart shines with His loving light, and love fills your heart, as you will embrace His calling and seek the truth of happiness as your spirit soars! (sigh) BRAVO JOSEPH!!! Your words of love and courage ring in your verse! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

walker
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since 2001-02-11
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2 posted 2001-12-08 05:38 PM


Faith will guide you my friend. Great poetic expression.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2001-12-08 07:10 PM


Good to see you, Eagle Scorpion. Keep reaching beyond those flaws. Not a single one amongst us is flawless.
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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4 posted 2001-12-09 09:24 AM


Yes..we are each flawed. But many qualities we still have. You have wonderful faith and reaching in this. Don't give up.

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

N orth Carolina Girl
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5 posted 2001-12-09 07:10 PM


EagleScorpion,you hang in there and keep your faith.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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