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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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Souls, like molecules of water, Like the shores of oblivion. Some stimulated by the sun's rays of holy light, Rising into the sky. This eternity means business. Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
oops i messed up on this one.. it's supposed to be "Lick the shores of oblivion" not like... oh well :-P |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Soooooooo wonderfully expressed, sweet friend! (sigh) May all our loving spirits embrace the light and soar into the beauty of eternity! (sigh) I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Its so very beautiful, E.S. Lick is much better than like in that line...it really makes a big difference. Why don't you go back and edit it  ...its such a gorgeous poem...people should see it as it was really meant to be.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
ahh.. (waves hand floppily) no biggie. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Eagle, this is definitely beautiful. I will keep my eyes peeled for your future unique creations! |
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