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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2001-12-07 10:53 PM


I sit on my porch, at the sky staring,
About to unravel a plan so daring.

Early December
The autumn leaves are leaving.
Crystals chill the wind.

The blue moon is coming.
Soaring through the stillness now.
A soft blue so true.

See your eyes, shining bright,
I've got that feeling tonight,
As we waste off so fast,
We forget the past.

Shooting stars fly by.
They speak to me in kind, warm tones.
Across they sky they soar.

I know that we will be alright.
Let's chase the moon this fine warm night.
Start that car, we are going far,
And lets not stop till we see sunlight,
We are children of the night.

The endless trees pass.
Surrounding darkened wheat fields.
Forgiving darkness.

The night cradles me,
Yes, the headlights advance on.
Dont stop to look back.

We are shooting stars.
Away from fears and pains we drive.
We are so alive.

See your eyes, shining bright,
I've got that feeling tonight,
As we waste off so fast,
We forget the past.
We are children of the night.

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

© Copyright 2001 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2001-12-07 10:58 PM


wonderful write...    i think we'd all like to be on a long ride just anywhere at some point or another...a good forgetting of the past--or sometimes of the present!  

i like the way youve written this one  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-12-07 10:59 PM




(smiles) Yes indeed!!! We are all shooting stars, and our dreams will come true as long as we believe in ourselves and worship love and its beauty! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet Joeseph, we all love you so very much! (big hugggggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
3 posted 2001-12-07 11:05 PM


BRAVO!!!!A magical flight that I want to join you on. I love it. The passion of soaring in the night sky just thrills me. Magnificent vision that took me on fantasy's flight. *sigh* I love it.     **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
4 posted 2001-12-08 01:03 AM


dg, noah, startime, thank you for your replies. I'm glad you like it.
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