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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-12-07 09:00 PM



Was That You?

I thought I heard my name
but the wind laughes
and the sun winks as I squint my eyes
straining to see you
reflections of blue stare from the sky
burning my face where once a kiss was
I ache for the voice I thought I heard
my bones cry for the touch of your hand
Was that you?

BloomingRose

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1 posted 2001-12-07 09:04 PM


Stunning!!!!So very beseeching. The yearning in this call is so powerful. I hope it was who you want it to be. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-07 09:17 PM




(sigh) Oh Debra, this is soooooooo beautifully yearning! (sigh) I hope that his hand will forever caress your heart and love you forever! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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