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JoMason
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0 posted 2001-12-07 08:04 PM


Two As One

Two hearts beat as one.
Two minds think the same.
Two lives turn to one.
Two souls create a flame.

One is mild and sweet.
One is fiery and hot.
One is drawn to heat.
One is definitely not.

Two laugh and act funny.
Two love to be near.
Two call each other honey.
Two hold each other dear.

One is how we will be.
One is who we are.
One is you and me.
One is two times better by far.

Jo Mason


© Copyright 2001 JoMason - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-12-07 08:08 PM


Hi! Welcome to Passions! This is a great poem, very true! Take a look around, I'm sure you will love it here! Please check youe e-mail for a special greeting! : )
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-12-07 08:12 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet Jo! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, the beauty of two hearts coming as one shines in this passionate poem! (sigh) Welcome to Passions, sweet Jo, may you be inpsired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your beautiful verse, we all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-07 08:19 PM


The first..Scarey, isn't it? We do alot of hand holding in here. Hope to see more of your poems.
sodpossom
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4 posted 2001-12-07 08:35 PM


Welcome aboard!!Nice first post.
Startime
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5 posted 2001-12-07 08:40 PM


BRAVO!!!A wonderful beginning. Welcome to Passions. You will find you are embraced by the most talented and loving poets on the internet. I will be looking forward to reading more of your work. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JoMason
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6 posted 2001-12-07 08:49 PM


Thank You All So Much

I sit here with tears in my eyes.
Too blurry to see what I type.
Your kind words are such a surprise!

I've read here today some words so great.
I feel humbled before you all.
I can tell, my poor "rhymer" heart will need to work very late!

Thanks so much for the warm welcome!
Jo Mason

Sunshine
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7 posted 2001-12-07 09:06 PM



Welcome to Passions, Jo!  So nice to have you here, I hope you find this to be the poet's home that we have all come to know and love.  Check your E-mail for a special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Irish Rose
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8 posted 2001-12-07 09:10 PM


Welcome!  

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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Gaia
9 posted 2001-12-07 09:16 PM


Welcome Jo. Their is so much variety here at Pips, you will surely enjoy every moment you spend here. Alas, those moments have become hours, and my housework piles up waiting for the day I turn this machine off. (That may take a while longer, winter is long, there is plenty of time before spring   )
This place can become another hearty meal for you. Enjoy.
PS very good first post! Good math.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2001-12-07 09:44 PM



Very nice first post, Jo!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
Make yourself at home.
  ~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2001-12-07 10:43 PM


Welcome aboard, Jo....
What a beautiful and romantic first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
           

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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12 posted 2001-12-07 10:53 PM


Welcome, Jo!! No doubt you will be a fine addition to our site..

We have only one rule...there is a poet here named LongJohnAG who has recently escaped from the Happy Acres Mental Institute and we have vowed that no one turn him into the authorities because he's kinda fun to have around. Keep that secret and you're welcome here...don't keep it and we will understand and you'll STILL be welcome here!  

dgvarner
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13 posted 2001-12-07 11:02 PM


welcome to passions, JO!!

glad to read you..hope you stick around...  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

Alan
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right next door
14 posted 2001-12-07 11:05 PM


Jo...WELCOME TO PASSIONS... That was a great intro. I love it.
alan

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