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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-12-07 07:58 PM


I stand upon this concrete deck
And gaze into the crystal waters
Seeing the outline of a ship
Resting on the harbor floor

The wind blows soft upon my face
Ruffling the surface of the water
Then up out of the waters depths
A drop of oil rises

Across the surface a rainbow spreads
Silent in its beauty
Legend says its sailors tears
The cries of those trapped below

A drop of oil a silent tear
Fifty years and more have passed
Since that day they gave the greatest gift
On a lovely Hawaiian bay

I stand here gazing at the wall
At the names engraved in stone
Fathers and brothers, uncles and sons
Gone to the depths

Another drop glistens rainbow bright
As I add silent tears of my own
For these men who never made it home
Arizona I cry for you


© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-07 08:52 PM


Thank you, so much, for reposting this wonderful poem. We need to remember and continue to honour these warriors. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sodpossom
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2 posted 2001-12-07 08:55 PM


Well written and much deserved tribute to those heroes!

Stevie

"In all things tried,you did the best you could do"

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3 posted 2001-12-07 08:59 PM


Wonderful tribute to our heroes!!
I think about them more and more around the holidays!

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4 posted 2001-12-07 09:03 PM


Thank You for posting this....

I was there at the Arizona Memorial yesterday
afternoon (12/6)...There were hundreds of
visitors going over to the memorial on the
ferry boats....I watched all of the elder
gentlemen,  wearing their garrison caps
which identified them as survivors...

Watched their faces,   saw the reflection
in their eyes....Knowing the sadness that
they felt...The memories of that day coming
back into their minds..

I could not help but shed a tear.....

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5 posted 2001-12-07 09:05 PM



Thank you for this, Paula...

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6 posted 2001-12-07 10:10 PM




(sigh) Such a beautiful heartwrenching but wonderful tribute to all our heroes! (sigh) May we forever remember them and love them as our freedom shines! (sigh) God Bless America! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-12-08 01:53 AM


Yes Paula they were hero's of their generation and many of them are here at Pearl Harbor right now in what may be the last trip for them...this is the 60th anniversary...I watched the jets fly over this morning...one breaks away and flies straight up into the clouds...James
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8 posted 2001-12-08 12:48 PM


Thank you Paula. It is a lovely tribute.
May the memory of the events that precipitated this tragedy stay in our minds as we move forward in time, and allow us to see the total picture clearly.

Marsha
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9 posted 2001-12-08 02:51 PM


Paula darling lil sister of my heart, I remember this one and it is indeed an honour to read it again.

Truly wonderful writing darling girl, the way this flows, and the memories it stirs, I can't believe I read this a year ago. My what a change there has been for both of us.

Absolutely wonderful darling girl.
    
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
    

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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