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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-12-07 07:28 PM


Every curve....every feature,

My one true love,

The loveliest creature,

A pair of emerald eyes,

Blazing promised paradise,

Silken lips, full with fiery passion,

No more beautiful figure, could anyone ever fashion,

First saw her, on that Puerto Vallarta moonlit night,

Seeing first only beauty, then love by morning's light,

We laughed and loved that week on Aztec's ancient shore,

My Mexico goddess had filled this lonely heart completely to the core,

A wedding worthy of heaven we had that following year,

Held each other in sweet love's embrace,

Vowing forever with joy's lingering tear,

Three wonderful years we'd have together,

Hoping for no end to this married bliss,

Then, kneeling shattered at her death bed,

Saying goodbye with just one last kiss.


(In memory of Rebecca, missing you so much!)



© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-07 07:39 PM


My heart goes out to you, Sir Robert...I know how much Rebecca means to you. She will be waiting to again hold you in her arms someday when it is time for you to join her. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-12-07 08:05 PM


Oh Robert, this is soooo sad!  I am very sorry if this story is indeed true.  This piece just reached inside my chest and squeezed my heart.  Beautifully written, but, oh so sad.  
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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3 posted 2001-12-07 08:19 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh sweet brother, my heart goes out to you, this is so sad and heartbreaking! (sigh) I know how your heart feels, but I know deep down you will meet her again when the time is right, and you will love her eternally, for your love is true, and nothing can ever break that! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (big hugggsssssss) My heart is always with you, Sir Robert!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-07 08:36 PM


Very sad but written so sweet!

Stevie

"In all things tried,you did the best you could do"

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