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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-12-07 01:58 PM


Beware he the one
with the many hidden names
he does not know truth.

He knows no remorse
easily he causes pain
he knows not loves glow.

Forget you know him
he does not know how to care
the womanizer.


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 12-07-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-07 02:40 PM


Donna, has anyone told you you write a terrific Senryu?

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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2 posted 2001-12-07 02:46 PM


Great senryus....like them a lot  

Charisma

~*Theresia~*

OWG
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3 posted 2001-12-07 03:50 PM


guy-i-zer performs
flirting wickedly her charms
dumps ice on his lap

(grin) had to do an equal time shot for us misused fellas..

smooth moves here GS...n-joyed

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4 posted 2001-12-07 04:33 PM




(sigh) Oh Donna, these are soooooo beautiful! You write these beautiful poems so well! (smiles) Nope, there is nothing like the womanizer! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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5 posted 2001-12-07 04:40 PM


Knowing he is out there keeps me running for cover.....Well put...I am ever on my guard. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

texasrose
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6 posted 2001-12-07 11:44 PM


Triple Senryu's!  Don't you hate men who would treat women with this much disrespect; or just the fact that anyone would treat anyone else with so little respect.
You picked a good one to get me going on, so I will just shut up now...*grrr*
Wonderful writing and powerful in such short lines.

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