Open Poetry #17 |
The Womanizer (Senryu ??) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beware he the one with the many hidden names he does not know truth. He knows no remorse easily he causes pain he knows not loves glow. Forget you know him he does not know how to care the womanizer. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Donna, has anyone told you you write a terrific Senryu? Kathleen (Kay) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Great senryus....like them a lot Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
guy-i-zer performs flirting wickedly her charms dumps ice on his lap (grin) had to do an equal time shot for us misused fellas.. smooth moves here GS...n-joyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Donna, these are soooooo beautiful! You write these beautiful poems so well! (smiles) Nope, there is nothing like the womanizer! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Knowing he is out there keeps me running for cover.....Well put...I am ever on my guard. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Triple Senryu's! Don't you hate men who would treat women with this much disrespect; or just the fact that anyone would treat anyone else with so little respect. You picked a good one to get me going on, so I will just shut up now...*grrr* Wonderful writing and powerful in such short lines. |
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