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First Love, First Kiss.....Marge's Challenge

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amigo
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0 posted 12-07-2001 01:29 PM       View Profile for amigo   Email amigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amigo



Feeling frozen after this
Intriguing interlude with a
Runaway romantic, I had a
Sentimental seizure, a
Typical tearjerker….

Love-lorn lunatic that I was and, an
Outwitted oddity, I became…
Vacillating in a vicious vacuum
Eternally evading my very existence….

Feeling foolish about all this,
Introspection I invoked…
Revisiting..…retracing…., a
Sure-footed surrender I made, and,
Truly tranquilized is how I felt..

Kindly knowledge kicked-in..
Imploring incessantly that
Strong Self- worth is what
Symbolizes Success!!!!




[This message has been edited by amigo (edited 12-07-2001).]

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1 posted 12-07-2001 11:24 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Okay! I love this, and why it is so far down the page with no replies could only be because the brilliance of it has blinded everyone here! LOL! This is a challenge well met if you ask me! To the top with you.

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

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I totally agree with Temptress and am glad she found it and brought it back up. It is a wonderful read......I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! I am so happy Jennifer found this timeless classic so I can read your beautiful lovely words! (smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet amigo, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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4 posted 12-08-2001 09:58 AM       View Profile for amigo   Email amigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amigo

Temptress - Thank you soooo much...i really started to feel there was something wrong, a major mistake, that no one felt like sharing their views/ suggestions....i truly appreciate what you've done, & ofcourse, your sweet way of expression...i'm pleased that you liked it...thanks again..

Startime - thank you...i'm glad to know that you loved it..


Noah Eaton - your words are so beautiful and you're a kind hearted & sweet friend...thank you dear for sending love from all of you this way...


luv & hugs,
amigo
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5 posted 12-08-2001 10:41 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Amigo~
This is just a wonderfully creative acrostic~
How wonderfully you have met the 'inspired' challenges~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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  Marge - thank you for your great inspiration and your loving & encouraging words...    

luv & hugs,
amigo
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wow you've done good
challenge excellently met!
 
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