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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-12-07 01:21 PM

Your silence seems cold
Yet your eyes, watchful eyes
are floating with love.
Thy words are but a few
Yet enough for me,
to feel your touch.
Thy words like the wine
to her suckers.
Thy worries I wear on
my sleeves.
Thy sweetness is dessert
to my lips.
Sweet remembrance
of liquior of mouth,
Lovely toughts
of cream of cakes
join me with bird chords
of your voice.
Lovely I sit next to you,
I tenderly touch your face.
Would you be mine,
If I be your sleeves?
Would you be my
cup of mouth?
Lay down my head
beside yours forever,
waiting upon your answer...

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (edited 12-07-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-07 01:50 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! I think "Cup Of Love" would be great! (smiles) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

2 posted 2001-12-07 03:36 PM

I like this. Interesting.

OWG
Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

3 posted 2001-12-07 03:41 PM

dug it huge...blend of willing and hungry..wanting and satisfied..

more than not enough

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2001-12-08 05:03 AM

Cup of Love seems to be nice title indeed. Thanks, really. Thanks for reading my threads.

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-12-08 02:57 PM

Love this...I suggest "Lovely Thoughts of Desire" for this is exactly what you have presented...James

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-12-08 03:41 PM

I agree, Cup of Love sounds perfect! Neat poem!

RP

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

7 posted 2001-12-08 03:45 PM

well.. im not too sure.. Cup of Love sounds neat, but.. maybe you could title it. "I Feel You Within", or, "Together Forever".. i dunno.. i never really liked titles much, you know

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2001-12-08 03:54 PM

A loving and lovely poem...how about calling it "Would You Be Mine?"

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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