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Glenn Logan
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 111
Virginia

0 posted 2001-12-07 11:35 AM



   In the summer-slow rain,
   individual leaves at random
   tremble as individual raindrops score perfect hits.

   In this slow summer rain,
   leaves tremble, bend, twist,
   and turn almost over as scattered raindrops strike.

   In this summer-slow rain,
   the leaves turn as one-by-one
   as random raindrops play their barely audible tune.

   Note: More of my poems can be found at:
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Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-07 12:06 PM


This is lovely, Glenn.  I cherish a good rain in any season  

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 814

2 posted 2001-12-07 03:45 PM


Yes, I've heard the sound of rain like music also.  Very good.
OWG
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 155
California
3 posted 2001-12-07 03:58 PM


rain is a mistress with many admirers..she dresses a thousand ways to please

you captured a few very well Logan

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