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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Freedom Someone's hands around your neck, choke life out, each time kissed. The ties that bind, between mind pages, such wasted love, to not be missed. Each naked thought, held in reserve of once upons, of future hold. The ties that bind, between mind pages, lost in failure, words of bold. Heart controls the body's wants, the mind is bound by sensual need. Freedom rises, desires strength, when mind decides more healthy feed. "Harsh lessons learned", some final words, I shall not fail, as some would say. My words of past have bled their truth, in freedom now, controlled my way. A calmness sensed, no need of Time, no calls of longing wished for sight. Each passing day, anew begins, in peaceful slumber, passed the night. No mysts or reigns or lady's thoughts no signal words to gloss a heart. Time was stolen, "capture" lost but freedoms back, from three year part. Spells can never break the will, the crone of old, nor sables touch. Richness shall inherit soul, of one whose life was sheltered much. Words are words, their meanings hold from eyes of blue, intensely lost. Sadness lives among the dark, where shadows hide to bear their cross. Someday a piece of me will reach that piece of you that binds those ties. A memory ache will rise as moon is full of thoughts to tear the eyes. In peace, the two of us will know, the world is more than one can give. Today I'm free, not cast aside, I'm bound, by heart of mine, to live. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Poetry evokes feeling right? Want to know how I felt reading this? Damn right you're not going to fail. We are Warrior Women (heh heh, Startime said I was and now I pass it on to you!) You don't have to prove yourself to anyone and you sure don't have to stop writing. I remember your early poetry. Gorgeous writing, and yes, we all go through a dark period, nothing wrong with that. That's the beauty of finding out about ourselves and loving ourselves. Others see it too. Revenge solves nothing, grudges are a waste of time and bitterness makes your face wrinkle, best thing a lady can "prove" to herself is to have class. This spells it out in spades!!!!!!! Kathleen (Kay) "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"Today I'm free, not cast aside, I'm bound, by heart of mine, to live." May you enjoy your "Freedom" for a very long time to come. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Okay that is it.......I am posting warrior woman and you need to know that you are one...through our trials we have become such. **big hugs** I love you, dear one. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Maureen, we all love you so much, and your heart always has much value and love to share! (sigh) Your heart shines with pure love and compassion and you will find freedom in believing in yourself always! (sigh) Always feel your heart, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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