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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-12-07 12:55 PM


A Moment of Time

This moment is mine all mine.
So I will take this opportunity
to record a few thoughts for eternity.

I feel a woman's sexy body
within my lustful fingertips
and I admire every touch
I take in sinful succulence
and I desire her more and more
with every move I make
and I feel inspired to breathe
her in with every breath I take.

In time I realize she is the
only woman that I truly adore
so I offer her my heart for
these moments and for evermore.

Will she desire me enough
to consider to be mine
or will this become only a memory
we shared within a moment of time.

JamesLee
December07
2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 12-07-2001).]

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Keith Morgan
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1 posted 2001-12-07 01:06 AM


You have expressed the sentiments of all those who have ever been in love.  Nicely written, I look forward to more.!!!!!!
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2 posted 2001-12-07 11:26 AM


James, this is so soft... glides across my heart so gently  
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3 posted 2001-12-07 12:41 PM


*sigh* Oh James....You sure can write romance!  Love this one, I do!  
~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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4 posted 2001-12-07 01:16 PM


this flows with romance across the page James.
well written.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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5 posted 2001-12-07 02:09 PM


James,

Always treat her tenderly, with kindness and honesty.  Then, yes, she will want you.  VERY good write, by the way!  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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6 posted 2001-12-07 02:57 PM


James I hope it goes on forever.
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-12-07 04:19 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet James, I too have these feelings always to the girl I love! (sigh) You always write passionate, sweet love so well, may this be a moment that will last eternally as she will always love you! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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8 posted 2001-12-07 04:25 PM


*sigh* I love it when you write like this. Romance flows so beautifully from your pen. **hugs** I hope there are countless moments filled with all the passion of your heart.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-01-08 11:14 PM


Thank you Keith, Sea, Nancy, Gentle Spirit, Auguste, Sandra, Noah and Startime for reading and responding...James
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