Sentimental Shakedown - Marge's challenge for Balladeer

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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

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0 posted 2001-12-06 07:55 PM

S entimental Shakedown
E very time I think of SPAM
N ever knew what't was before
T ill I learned from Balladeer
I n his poems he often mentioned
M eals of SPAM and Vienna's long
E ndless phrases of enjoyment
N ever ceased to nag Long John
T ales of life that touched my heart
A nchering deep into my soul
L ovely man but he'll give me...a
S entimental Shakedown
H ear the rythem in his poems
A lways flowing like a river
K issing ladies with a smilie
E very page of blue he roams
D o you feel the same my dear
O h my goodness keep it quiet
W hisper it softly into my ear
N ever let it be known to...Balladeer

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 12-06-2001).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-12-06 08:29 PM

Titia, I won't tell Balladeer, but I'll just bet he finds this fantastic poem! This is great and you met Marge's challenge very well!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-12-06 09:11 PM

this is great, Titia, you have such a kind, loving heart!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-12-06 09:53 PM

Wonder if he's heard of the new turkey Spam...think he'll have it on Christmas? Fun write, Titia.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

4 posted 2001-12-06 09:59 PM

Fun poem Titia. But you'll live longer and healthier without Spam.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-12-08 08:33 AM

Titia~
You are just the GREATEST ~
An acrostic 'shakedown' for the sweetest fellow we could know~

He will LOVE it~

Oh, Balladeer ... we're calling yooooouuuuuu ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-12-08 08:42 AM

Perhaps if we keep this at the top
he'll find his early Saturday morning smile!

Well done, Titia!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2001-12-08 08:59 AM

Titia,
Well done I'm sure he'll enjoy it.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2001-12-08 06:58 PM

Titia, thank you for sending me the link - I wish everyone in here would do that (so much easier), and I enjoyed this so much as will Michael. Good job!

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

9 posted 2001-12-08 07:11 PM

Thanks sweet friends, and Marge, I've so much fun with your challenge

Shame though the subject seems to miss his 'ode'(LOL)

Sharon, I'll keep sending the links over as you requested, thanks for stopping by.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 12-09-2001).]

Balladeer

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